[Fanfict] Hitman Reborn - One Night in Bangkok Part 2 - 1896

[kakyuu_no_yume]

Title: One Night in Bangkok Part 2
Author: yamikakyuu
Characters:TYL!Hibari, TYL!Chrome (1896) and guest appearance by TYL!Mukuro
Disclaimer: All based on Amano-sensei's creation.
Note: Author's notes follow fict. If you havent read Part 1 I suggest you do. Link to below. Oh and because this is one of my ficts, Hibari does smoke in it XD

Part 1 - Chrome

Comments

[nicetoknowyou07]

Just finished the first part and so happy to get the chance to read the second part. 8D

Mukuro was definitely listening in on everything. Everything.

*nerds over this*

It was so good! And no, there aren't too many errors. I saw one, but I wasn't really looking for them.

“But we don’t have too!” she protested rising from the bed now standing at the foot of it. “We are a family, we…”

“Maybe you believe that,” his tone was mocking, “I fight because I want too, I enjoy it. This is merely an excuse to release it.”

The two too's should be "to." Ahaaa, tongue twister?

[nicetoknowyou07]

Oh, and I just noticed you said there will maybe eventually be a part III and I wowuld SO love it. :D

[yamikakyuu]

yeah there will be a part 3, Im currently working on it.

[yamikakyuu]

Mukuro does listen >8D that part plays a role in part 3 oh the teaser!

thanks for the corrections, Ill try to remember to fix those <3

[runesque]

Fix iiiit DDD8.

[kakyuu_no_yume]

Fixed!