Не Подарочное, Подвенечное, Полуночное

[kakayaraznica]

она хотела перед
Ним стелиться
о Нем молится
да Им божиться

она к обрывам
одним порывом
всегда стремится

скорее слиться
совокупиться
и раствориться

восстать из пены
и возродиться
увы, придётся

сильна ты, Птица.

Comments

[naymit]

spat' pora
usnul bychok
lyog v krovatku na bochok

Get the hint?

[kakayaraznica]

are they beginning to suck?
a to ya uje ne v silah opredelit'

[naymit]

you don't expect me to read them at 3:15 in the a.m.? I just noticed you are still on. What's going on, or is it normal for you too?

[kakayaraznica]

i do, in fact :)

i have no idea whats going on. it just wont let me sleep.

[naymit]

well, I read it. Vsyo stihotvorenie na glagol'noj rifme- eto schitetsya nepriemlimym v russko-yazychnoj poezii :) Now go to bed :) or my reviews will get harsher

[kakayaraznica]

thanks. maybe now it will stop.
a harsher - davaj.

[naymit]

unfortunately, it was an idle threat. i am not a harsh critic of poetry, even if the poetry deserves it :)

[kakayaraznica]

now THAT is just mean!

[naymit]

told you, I can be good at plaing villain

[naymit]

going home... your poetic prowess proved to be too much for me :)