"The n00b" - Report#5 8D

Nov 05, 2010 19:15

N00b reporting.

No art this time. D: No time to do much lately but type in between work.

Due to all the gorging down of "le fine KakaSaku" buffet we have been given, my drabble bone starting biting at my ankles like a little puppy craving attention. A puppy with tiny needle sharp teeth.

So, to purge my mind out of the idea, I had to type this down, ( Read more... )

genre: romance, genre: angst, fanfic, rating: m

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marybwolf November 5 2010, 20:55:02 UTC
This. Oh, Lord. Words. Where the hell did they go? I know so many words for 'good' or 'amazing' or 'phenomenal.' I don't know where they are, but this deserves all of them and more.

It's sensual and sexy in such a bittersweet way, and the desperation Sakura is feeling is really coming across; my heart throbbed for her. Your descriptions are-- again, with the 'where did my words go?' thing. Simply put:

THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU. <3

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katzenherrin November 5 2010, 22:17:32 UTC
ARGGGGGGG! Thank YOU!

+squeals a little+ You have no idea how glad you make me with those words that you try to find and elude you. <3 It means so much coming from you, since I LOVE your writing style, so I am in a clear lack of lexicon myself to properly describe my own appreciation of your praise. It makes me happy and giddy and +squeals again+

Consider yourself virtua-glomped. :p

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marybwolf November 5 2010, 22:46:00 UTC
Consider yourself virtua-glomped right back, Katz. XD

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katzenherrin November 5 2010, 23:32:38 UTC
In times like these, I miss the icon fest that Dev offers. LOL! Oh! And thanks so much for the comment at FF.Net as well. +hugsh+

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winter_hawksan November 5 2010, 20:58:17 UTC
Waiting with breath abated for the next installment of this hauntingly beautiful story. I love the angst and desperate, frantic mood.

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katzenherrin November 5 2010, 22:22:07 UTC
+bows courteously+ Many thanks! It will come soon, since I am definitely inspired with the feedback given so far. <3 Your words inspire mine.

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bluerising November 5 2010, 23:08:46 UTC
Hot damn. This was really excellent. Short-fire descriptions, and rapid sentences made this a fast-paced fic. Which fits in perfectly with getting everything from Sakura’s perspective and her sense of chaotic lust. Then also… this is only the first half of the story?

Great work. Can’t wait to see more.

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katzenherrin November 5 2010, 23:30:25 UTC
:'D Thank you. Again, one of my fav writers offers such praise. I am really honoured. I needed to scan this a couple of times to be sure of that pace, and not abuse repetition too much. I am glad it came across like that.

And yes, I am playing with POV's so it made sense for me to break it down here. :D +little grin+ The rest will come soon!

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moldycookies November 6 2010, 01:11:53 UTC
And this is why I love you. :D

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katzenherrin November 6 2010, 01:34:12 UTC
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 +hugs+

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katzenherrin November 6 2010, 14:37:32 UTC
+grins like a maniac+ A comment is always good ma'am! <3 It gives me incentive, even if it's just a "<3" kind of comment. :p

Let's ladysquee over it shall we?

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katzenherrin November 7 2010, 20:29:08 UTC
Oh! Forgot something. +brings in the tea and cookies+

No true ladysquee is proper without a cup of tea. u.u

XD

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