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Breakable

Aug 24, 2009 22:56

Title: Breakable
Author: aviss
Pairing: Kakashi/Iruka
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 300
Prompt: Fragile as Glass

( Breakable )

week #003: fragile as glass

Comments 27

photoash August 24 2009, 21:03:58 UTC

LOL :D very amusing! I like the playfulness you infuse in their relationship!

aviss August 25 2009, 19:26:48 UTC

Thank you! I like them playful :)

faorism August 24 2009, 21:04:18 UTC

ROFL~! When I started, I kind of felt lightheartedness, which didn't make much sense considering the strength of Iruka's words. Then those last few lines... KILLED IT! Awesome.

aviss August 25 2009, 19:27:15 UTC

Heh, thanks... the words might be serious but I'm afraid I'm not :)

animemetoo August 24 2009, 21:31:29 UTC

LOL! Good one! Gotta love Kakashi's pervy mind!

aviss August 25 2009, 19:27:36 UTC

Thanks! Kakashi's a perv and Irula too naive

yes_rhade August 24 2009, 22:56:41 UTC

Oh yes...

aviss August 25 2009, 19:27:52 UTC

heh, thanks

sejitsu August 24 2009, 23:29:17 UTC

That was terribly amusing and entertaining at the same time. Devious Kakashi is devious. I can practically see Iruka's face at the realization. *giggle*

aviss August 25 2009, 19:28:22 UTC

Oh, he's not going to be happy, that's for sure! Thanks!