[fic] Falling from Heaven (CI prequel): Chapter 2

[kajornwan]

This has been sitting on my hard drive for the past three weeks waiting to be edited one last time and until now I hadn't been able to pull myself away from LOGH which makes everything I ever write seems like a bad joke. And because I'm not entirely out of that universe, I apologize in advance if this turns out to be the biggest crap of the year

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[kajornwan]

If this were live action, Game of Thrones wouldn't sell. The plot twists in GoT is a joke in comparison, you never get retarded kings in LOGH, and while you know everyone you love can die in a single episode of both LoGH and GoT, LOGH's deaths makes absolute sense and is never stupid. Every time someone gets excited about the next GoT episode (and I used to be one), I find myself going, LOL, you REALLY haven't watched LOGH.

barely any (overt) romance,
I wouldn't say that after 26. Reinhard has the equivalent of CI's love bracelet so to speak after this. And the entire series depends on if and when he touches that locket. It's worse than my Love pendent, because people live or die because of that locket alone and the phrase IKWA that gets spoken by everyone even Yang will make you say all the time, "this might not have happened IKWA." Luckily, LOGH is not retarded enough to rely solely on this, because Reinhard does have more than a handful of admirals that will see to it that he gets the throne whether or not he has second thoughts, and Reinhard is not love sick enough to act like Fei. That said, none of the quantum physics stuff that you love disappears, if anything it amplifies!