[fic] Paradise Day 5 (Part 2)

[kajornwan]

Title: Paradise Day 5 (Part 2)
Rating: Strictly NC-17
Warning: OC, threesome
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, mentions of Alexei and an OC
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano. Alejandro and Alexei belong to me.
Beta: This installment has not been beta-ed, for the reason that I don't wish to waste my betas' precious times with

Comments

[maplett]

Clap clap clap (applause) ....
So yummy!!!!! Thank you!!!!
I am always willing to read anything you post :)

[kajornwan]

Yummy *yay* And Ie as kinda worried if I can still write smut, not that it matter that much XD

[angel0399]

Lol I wouldn't mind a M/A/A prequel ^__^

I thought it was a cool ending to Paradise and it answered some questions about Misha that were thought about. You know you wouldn't have wasted my time with this ^__^ I love any reason to read smut.

[kajornwan]

Thank you, I'm glad you think it's a cool ending. Now that I've finished everything I'd left unfinished I can probably move on to something new. My hands are so full. So many things to write. So little time. *sighs*

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

Hi there ^_^ Nice to see you around *hugs you possessively* Everyone is so gone from Fei fandom. *sighs*

It was a delightful piece in a somewhat sad way
Wonderful! I really wanted it to be sad. IT's the end of vacation, you know, I'm always sad when that happens. T_T

The next thing I am dying to write, is that part of the prequel when Alejandro stayed with the Arbatovs because Alexei and Feodora and Vladimir will be there. The whole family together. It's even sadder when I think about it actually.

*hugs* Thanks again for sticking around

[kajornwan]

Ah, yes, my OCs and how I love them like my children. My new beta has a point when she yelled at me that those who love writing OCs should be writing original!, which I am, but this is pretty obvious that I didn't take her advice on that one LOL. It's not really my fault I'm given absolutely no background of Mikhail whatsoever from his creator *pouts*

Your OCs are not only really interesting, but they're in your fics for a reason.
Or I just tend to run out of ideas so I have to shove in another character! LOL But thank you for willing to like my OCs. Some readers really hate OCs and won't even try at all. As for a reason, for Alejandro at least, he's here because I need to write Alexei again. I miss writing Alexei, Feodora, and Vladimir. And my new beta is so right though, without Fei, that is just like an original story!!

My favorite part of this fic was the end, when Misha and Alejandro finally resolved thingsI'm glad you feel so. This is the part that will be missing in the prequel (again, if I ever get to it). I'm glad that

[kpopangel]

The stripping part was just Fei's empty threat? XD To think he and Mikhail quarrelled over that! Woah 5 days are surely too short ;)

Tbh, I would rather they kiss and makeup (without Alejandro) but it's your story, so... your call! :)