[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

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[kajornwan]

Another gay porn interference at work! Hallelujah! XDD

I love the scene with Asami, please make him suffer he deserves it;
*dies laughing*. Oh I will. I created Feodora monster for this very purpose. *rubs hands* Well, on a serious note, I want Asami to clean up his mess and clear things up with Fei, and there is just no other way to push him than this. I don't want him to go all soft, so somebody has to force him to XD Plus he has to answer to whatever he has done to Fei and Akihito and Mikhail, so yeah, it's not called Retribution for nothing *Evil laugh*

I'm glad you enjoyed the part with Mikhail and especially Tao. I feel the need to fix that boy like i've never needed to fix anyone before. And he needs to get far far away from Fei's wet dream as much as possible, so yeah, let big mama brainwash that filth out of him for a while and Fei will have to have nightmares about Tao murdering someone instead! *shudders*

As for Feodora, LOL I do admit she's too much of a superwoman, but for one thing, I have this unquenchable need to picture her in badass pilot suit blowing the @#$% out of something, and as I am about to move on to my original that I must be more sensible about, allow me this unreasonable fantasy XD (Actually, my non-pilot, filthy rich, must-know-how-to-do-everything sister gets to learn how to fly a military jet, so I didn't think that it was too much ^^!). Anyway, I will consider your suffering and see what I can do XD But why no airplanes? It has always been my husband's unreachable goal to own a plane and fly it, and if by some miracle that happens, I'm sure I'd learn how to with him ^_^

I will try to update faster, now that I am passionate about this again. Thank you so much for contributing to that, as always!

[alexolgicant]

Thank you for being so considerate about the update, and as far as you can make Asami suffer, even if that involves Aki; and to let me read that finally Fei make up his mind, Feodora could be Rasputin if you want.

I know that Mikhail must suffer in order to put himself together, and to clear Fei's mind. But once you are done with this I would like to know if you can ask your muse if both of you could get a really long history about what happens with Mikhail at fifteen, you are really good at get into the characters mind and I would like to get that heart breaking part of your history. PLEASE !!!! *begs on her knees* ありがとうございます先生

[kajornwan]

And suffer Asami shall *tugs sleeves drooling*

I actually have been longing to write about Mikhail when he's younger, especially what he's been through with Alexei and Feodora. But while I'm itching to write that nightmare Mikhail suffered, I'm quite scared of it myself >_< both from thinking of the scenes and from fearing that my skills will not quite be able to do it justice. It's a nice challenge though. Perhaps one day soon I will be able to. Thanks for expressing interest though. It's good to know what readers want to read - tickles my muse, you know?