[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

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[kajornwan]

LOL I don't think Yoh loves betraying, but I love to think he is the kind of man who is driven by his priorities not moral issues, which is why he makes a great mole and why his coldness is so hot sometimes. I can't explain him like this, Yoh needs to be written in chapters to be understood! To me, at least. I loved writing the kiss too. And after this Yoh can tell Fei Mik kissed him, and we'll get to witness Fei's jaw drop (or Mik getting his ear pulled!) lol

I'm glad you're ok with Tao training to become a deadly weapon! I think he has so much potential to become much more than Fei's valet (or wet dream *shudders*). The male version of Feodora would be fabulous, don't you think? I mean he has it in him, eating Aki's food back in NT and all he he.

I think the first step of progress is this time Aki is willing to become a hostage to push their relationship forward and take control in his own hands. He has fallen victim again in the end but I think the only one who will lose everything and having to reform himself is Asami. The conflict between being who he is and loving Akihito is such a fun thing to write. Everyone has to make a decision here, Yoh picking his path once and for all to stand with Fei not Asami, Aki pushing Asami against the wall and really jump into his world as oppose to having one foot out the door as in canon, Asami having to decide between ditching Aki to keep his way or include him in his life and quit the pet treatment, and Tao choosing to stay innocent and useless or turning to the dark side to be useful. Mikhail is forced to face his past for the first time in decades, Fei has finally realized what is truly important to him and learned to move on, and Feodora has to come to terms with her relationship with Mik. Gosh, I love trouble XDD I said too much. But that means I'm passionate and I'll update faster!

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