[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

Comments

[kajornwan]

Gosh, I love making people sneak away at work to read gay porn LMAO. I'm glad it was able to distract you from the boring day. I totally get you!

Asami getting the short end of the stick has been long overdue. The man is always portrayed as invincible and indestructible, and to me, there is nothing interesting about a man with no flaws. I have been itching so bad to see Asami in 3D (the man has been 1D since birth =_=) and write something that will make him realistic enough for me to like him. Asami actually has a lot of flaws in terms of keeping a relationship, and I feel that AxA could have such a heart wrenching love story if one takes into account the fact that Asami sucks so fucking much on how to properly love someone, at the same time, Aki is human and will never be able to tolerate this treatment to eternity. AxA trouble has to stop ending up with Asami fuck-fixing everything (he can try, but it shouldn't be accomplished the nth time)! I want to conclude this with AxA moving forward, Asami coming clean with Fei, and giving Fei the ending he deserves. I wish I had more time to write AxA.

You're not alone about Feodora. I like her story with Mikhail so much too that I have a few one shots in my head of them in the past when Mik hs yet to know Fei waiting to be written. LOL to Tao calling her mama! I'd want to see Fei when he sees Tao again so much. He'd be more like another Arbatov! And he needs to start worshipping a woman and getting far far far away from Fei's dreams!! *is still traumatized*. The damn boy will be fixed when all this is done. I am going to have Feodora hi-jack the damn kid from YA and turn him into something presentable and acceptable. As of now, he has no place in Fei's home!

All that Testosterone... I once told Del that is not a word to ue around me, I'm all weak in the knees now. *melts* I have a feeling she tops everyone in terms of testosterone level. And it was so much fun to imagine Asami thinking wtf is wrong with Mikhail? He has a thing for vindictive bitches or something? Both his wife and lover are making Asami grow cancer XD

I think Yoh had been the 1st on Mik's to kill list before he knew about AsamixFei, then he moved to second and 3rd. Although him teeming up with Feodora now will be a huge problem. They make such an appropriate pairing not to mention indestructible too!

Thanks for always being here to get me going. I hope to be able to update sooner than before!

[delwynmarch]

I wish I had more time to write AxA.

O.o

*jaw drop*

You... You what??

YOU wish you had more time to write *AxA* !? WHAT IS THIS?? THE END OF THE WORLD IS COMING!!

:P

I have a feeling she tops everyone in terms of testosterone level.

Sorry, but not possible :P Feodora wouldn't look so feminine if she had that much testosterone in her body - just ask my trans girlfriends :D

Although him teeming up with Feodora now will be a huge problem. They make such an appropriate pairing not to mention indestructible too!

LOL! First Asami, then Fei Long, now Mikhail... Looks like Yoh just can't help pissing people off by helping them in ways they don't agree with :P

[kajornwan]

Oh oh yeah I do. Given that I pretty much fucked up the interpretation of every single character as defined by canon, why should AxA's characterization get away with it? Who doesn't want to dive into a tragic love story about an egotistic, self-centered, sadistic, psychopath with possible childhood trauma that leads him to have absolutely no clue how to commit to a relationship and treat a lover, who happens to fall head over heels for a young boy who has what it takes to push the man to the edge and along the way leave so many doors for some awesome shit to happen? But yes, that would be yet another AU story with my own characters using YA's characters' names just like CI. I don't even see AxA anymore, I see another couple with the same situation. *is suck at fan fiction *

P.s. now I go back to watching Revenge on Netflix XD

[delwynmarch]

But yes, that would be yet another AU story with my own characters using YA's characters' names just like CI. I don't even see AxA anymore, I see another couple with the same situation.

I want to disagree. Or rather, I want to point out that AU is not OOC. Your AxA is AU, yes, but not OOC. In fact, I see it as an example of what SHOULD be happening in canon, of what I was EXPECTING to see in PitA.

So basically, I see your AxA as being covered by the CWC tag as well ;) "Similar to canon until the end of NT, and then diverging wildly from PitA and the threesome and so on", is the definition of CWC, after all, and perfectly describes your AxA.

So AU, yes. But not OOC, so not "another couple with the same situation". This IS AxA - just one possible CWC!AxA.

[kajornwan]

You know, I've always skipped AxA in the manga and it's only recently that I began to keep one eye open for PitA, hoping that finally(!) this pairing would get somewhere and YA would prove to me again that she still can come up with more than just pretty pictures. The last chapter was the last thread for me and PitA has proven to be nothing more than a Pain in the Ass! Its total failure actually made me want to write AxA, just as somebody should be writing YohxFei and fix that damn novel. At this point, I have lost all hope in this mangaka. She needs to keep to illustrating novels. Period.

Actually I was really scared I might get spanked for putting AxA through this. I'm glad it hasn't happened yet

[angel0399]

Sorry I'm not caught up... what happened now in PitA?

[kajornwan]

What happened in PitA? AxA gets new villain who tries to split them up, Aki runs away and looking like he'd had it this time for real (omg) and then he gets into trouble where Asami comes to the rescue and it's back to fuck-fixing. Everything is all good again after a good shot of brain washing yoghurt injection from the big man. The end. As expected. Always. Did you expect something else to happen by any chance? I hope not, because this is yaoi and all things lead to sex because that is what the world needs right now, sex that solves all problems *yay*

[angel0399]

*sigh* No I guess I wasn't expecting anything...

[angel0399]

AxA trouble has to stop ending up with Asami fuck-fixing everything

Thank you!!

[zsuzsapo]

[angel0399]

Yeah, she's done such a great job with Yoh and Feodora that now we want her to write them together =)