[fic]Retribution Fourteen

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the really late update (at least I didn't take six months). I'm not sure about the quality of this chapter since my brain may still contain some toxin from the recent you-know-what. But if I don't try to get this out, I may just quit this fic altogether. I usually edit a lot more times than this. Sorry

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[kajornwan]

If there is one reason why I would not give up this fic is because my readers have not given up on me! It would not be fair at all! Thank you for liking it so much and letting me know. I will try to write as soon as I have time and can pull myself together. From here it's very difficult and angsty to write and I don't want to mess it up *is scared*

We've only been able to read the summaries of the novel. I can't link you because it's a locked post and I'm not suppose to share the links. But, no, you don't want to know. It has taken me weeks to detox that crap out of me! Basically it's Yoh XFei done in the lamest way, the plots have more holes than cheese, and Fei's characterization was #%^}{{^+=•+^%}{{]. And oh, no Mik, just one phone call from him in the end that leaves the MxF door opened. But still, for the #%^*+*>}|{__}%^*+ that Fei and Yoh's characterization underwent, you'd do better to not read it. Oh and there's disturbing YanxFei rape as well as TaoxFei becoming canon in the future *goes puke her guts out* Sorry, I get mad every time I think about it ^^!