[fic]Retribution Thirteen

[kajornwan]

No, you're not hallucinating and this is not a repeated post of that chapter I put out last Saturday. It is a new update, believe it or not. But this is what I call a muse attack, and this chapter she attacks..hard

Comments

[immorta_beloved]

...I have no words for this... really I don't...

this was the best chapter I've read in a long time. it started as dark, crude, then ended whit a hint of romance.

and the cliffhanger!!! I loved it. I loved the whole chapter from top to bottom!!

when Mikhail slapped Tao I felt my guts clenching. it's a horrible sight, yet I liked it. I liked how mikhail tries to treat Tao as an adult. I wonder how Tao's character will develope here after what happened in this chapter...

then the conversation over the phone between Mikhail and Fei almost had me crying (and I don't cry so often when I read fanfic, I only did once when reading the end of revelation, and this is the second time xD)

now I can't wait to read the next chapter!! (when you said that you where going to post 13 soon I didn't think you meant this soon xD I was umprepared for such a wonderful, intense chapter, and reading this now left me speechless and shocked)

What now?? Will mikahil agree to this sick exchange??? can't wait to find out!!
I love you for this wonderful chapter and for the cliffhhanger (it's weird to say, but i like cliffhangers xD)

PS: I won't kill you, don't worry ^_^ who will write 14 then?? XD *I'm joking XD* BTW yours is a clever way to get comments XD even though I'm confident you will get them all with such an incredible chapter ^_^

waiting for your next update!! thank you so much for this chapter!!

all the best,

Annalisa.

*Hugs*

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for your amazing comment as always. And really, damn you, in a way, because I was thinking about quitting this since no one seems to be reading and go work on my original story which might actually make some money, but no, with readers like you still on board, this is worth finishing.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it filled with all kinds of emotions. I know what I did to Tao was pretty harsh, but I feel it's about time we make a man out of him, and who better to strike that into Tao but Mikhail who, without Fei, probably cares for him the most. It was done with love and it has to be hard, because from now Mikhail will train him hard. And also, as Feodora says, Mikhail is unstable. I kept imagining myself being that stressed and having an annoying boy weeping endlessly. I probably hit him with a chair. Lol Mikhail was very patient already. Let's face it, Tao is not nearly cute or young enough to be allowed to cry that often.

I am glad there is one person who feels with me the significance of their conversation on the phone. They haven't seen each other for so long and I wanted them to be together again, at least in their heads. And for what is about to come, Fei needs to believe in them to survive. I cried writing this, and I am very glad that you felt it too.

Pfft, Soon? FYI, I used to update weekly. Yes, I am capable of updating weekly if I have time to write XD And I have changed my mind, I will try to wrap this up as soon as I can and get it over with. But where work stands right now, I won't be able to start 14 until next week anyway. Thanks again for stopping by and taking time to pay me so well with this comment. ^_^