HI,*** long time passed after my last comment, a lot of thingshappend in this period that made me unab le to read and comment your fics,but from now on i'll try to be more present. You know I'm addicted to all your fics, from C.I, to Revelation and now Retribution,and even if sometimes your taste for tragedy shock me,in the end I realise it suits perfectly and gives meaning to the plot. It's worthless to say I was shocked about Alexei's death 'cos I was starting to like him very much,but I like the way everything is changing. The thing I like the most is this role reversal between Mik and Fei in this chapter Mik always was the one who"took care" of Fei,even when seamed their relation was over,he put Yoh beside Fei.And now that Mik needs help, finally we could see a Fei that takes responsability of his feelings for him and perhaps from now on we'll have the chance to see a dangerous but more conscious and mature crime lord coming out..??? .??? Fedora..? I don't know..Sure is a beautiful character,but here come out my personal woman's feelings, that never would have made the choice to stay with a man that want to stay with someone else, and so I feel quite sad for her life. I can understand her lonlyness and anger against Fei,but as a woman,I would like her to be able to shut that door,and maybe to see another one open. I'd like to write a lot of other things,but my limit is my poor english,so THANK YOU for your beautiful works,and I hope to read the next chapter very soooon!!! XXXD *HUGS* Mary
Hi ^_^ It's good to see you back. I hope things are getting better for you now. My taste for tragedy is rather strong, but at least I've come to the conclusion that I don't want to end it tragically, whereas 2-3 months ago I was planning exactly that. So there's a breath of fresh air for you ^_^ I really didn't have to kill Alexei, but killing him gives me an opportunity to move the plot as you've noticed. I needed this change in role, or else Fei will never realize what he's about to lose. And yes, Fei Long is on the verge of becoming a true dragon outside and in which is the goal of this fic, and therefore this trilogy is about to end soon (but not so soon, maybe 10 more chapters? XD)
Feodora is a problem for a lot of us women, because we all hate seeing a woman stay with a man who treats her like shit. But then again, I think we never have a problem with a man who stays with a woman who treats him badly, instead we call them 'romantic', the way a lot of ppl see Yoh. I find it quite strange, and it's probably because we, as women, are sensitive to being dominated, so we find it unacceptable to see a woman stay with a man who doesn't care. To me, Feodora suffers a lot and probably wants to leave, but just like Yoh, she can't just forget him. I do believe she will move on though, but I don't think she'll ever truly shut the door. Well, I mean who shuts the door on Mikhail Arbatov? He can use me as his door mat and I'll be happy LOL
The next chapter is up and it should explain a lot of things on Feodora. I hope you will enjoy it as much and thanks again for taking time to comment. I do need to be encouraged from time to time! *hugs*
long time passed after my last comment, a lot of thingshappend in this period that made me unab le to read and comment your fics,but from now on i'll try to be more present. You know I'm addicted to all your fics, from C.I, to Revelation and now Retribution,and even if sometimes your taste for tragedy shock me,in the end I realise it suits perfectly and gives meaning to the plot. It's worthless to say I was shocked about Alexei's death 'cos I was starting to like him very much,but I like the way everything is changing. The thing I like the most is this role reversal between Mik and Fei in this chapter
Mik always was the one who"took care" of Fei,even when seamed their relation was over,he put Yoh beside Fei.And now that Mik needs help, finally we could see a Fei that takes responsability of his feelings for him and perhaps from now on we'll have the chance to see a dangerous but more conscious and mature crime lord coming out..???
.??? Fedora..? I don't know..Sure is a beautiful character,but here come out my personal woman's feelings, that never would have made the choice to stay with a man that want to stay with someone else, and so I feel quite sad for her life. I can understand her lonlyness and anger against Fei,but as a woman,I would like her to be able to shut that door,and maybe to see another one open.
I'd like to write a lot of other things,but my limit is my poor english,so THANK YOU for your beautiful works,and I hope to read the next chapter very soooon!!!
XXXD *HUGS* Mary
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Feodora is a problem for a lot of us women, because we all hate seeing a woman stay with a man who treats her like shit. But then again, I think we never have a problem with a man who stays with a woman who treats him badly, instead we call them 'romantic', the way a lot of ppl see Yoh. I find it quite strange, and it's probably because we, as women, are sensitive to being dominated, so we find it unacceptable to see a woman stay with a man who doesn't care. To me, Feodora suffers a lot and probably wants to leave, but just like Yoh, she can't just forget him. I do believe she will move on though, but I don't think she'll ever truly shut the door. Well, I mean who shuts the door on Mikhail Arbatov? He can use me as his door mat and I'll be happy LOL
The next chapter is up and it should explain a lot of things on Feodora. I hope you will enjoy it as much and thanks again for taking time to comment. I do need to be encouraged from time to time! *hugs*
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