[fic]Retribution Six

Jul 26, 2011 08:33

A relatively fast update, and the next one would be faster, since Seven is being beta-ed ( Read more... )

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Re: finally able to read and comment anonymous July 30 2011, 01:19:38 UTC
Lol i didn't expect you to like her more. I understand there are some things about some people that just doesn't do it for you, me or anyone. But if i have to explain her behavior,Mikhail is a family and whether or not she leaves him as a wife to marry another guy, he will always mean a lot to her, sort of the way Asami will always mean a lot to Fei, no matter how bad he's treating Fei (and that's pretty bad - actually the way he treats Akihito is worse, fuck-cleaning him after he just got raped WTF?). They have a history together that i haven't got time to write and Mikhail had been more than kind as a brother and a friend. I can see her leave him, totally, just not right now when everythng is a mess and her family needs her. But then i also believe she would still risk her new man for the sake of him, the same way i believe Yoh would for Fei should he ever gets married and Fei is in trouble. Feodora knew from the very beginning that he would never love her as a woman, it was never aquestion of leaving him or not, because she'd never had him in the first place. Besides, nothing would change, husband or not, Mikhail remains her savior. But that said, i still don't expect to convince you anything XD She wasn't written to be loved, and also, she's there because somebody has to be the goat when I show off the most delicious thing about Mikhail's personality - that he's generally a heartless prick, but he will be an angel to only one person in the whole wide world, and that is Fei Long.

Ha ha. i don't think you have to worry about Yoh x Feodora, because while i don't object to the idea, I don't think there's a way i can pair them up that it would make sense. Even if there is it would take a fic of epic proportions dedicated to them that explains how and why this happen and I don't have that kind of patience when my hands are already full XD You know me, I don't approve of love that 'just happens' without a proper explanation and an angsty ride!

Anyway, thanks sweetie for stopping by and give me your precious two-cents! I hope Feodora gets better next chapter that is being beta--ed i think she does.

P.S. It's meant to be lay in meaning. I can nver use this damn set of words right.

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Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 30 2011, 01:21:40 UTC
That was me BTW, forgot to login XD

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Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 30 2011, 02:38:32 UTC
Lol I know. I was going to delete it and re-comment to correct and I couldn't bother. Still I found the unnecessary need to rectify it. I don't know why XD

You're right, it is refreshing lol. I'm kinda glad that you get emotional, it's better than not feeling anything and finding the need to skip the way I feel with Bran or A x A. I'd rather see you hate her with a passion if you can't like her.

Actually, the only people you see here would prefer a badass, others do prefer Captain America, Aki, Danierys, and the Hangover part II. And yes, only in literature, well, not really, as long as they don't kill people I don't mind RL pricks and arrogant bastards falling helplessly in love with me!

As for Feodora, Lol, she hasn't suffered enough? But by get better I meant you might hate her a little less... Might, just might lol

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Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 30 2011, 12:08:27 UTC
LOL ok, sure, let me think of a way to make you hate her even more.

Are arrogant bastards falling for you by the dozen?
Unfortunately, I'm married to the only bastard that fell for me. My looks? Sure, I attract senile, creepy old men-passers by who try to help me with my grocery daily. Other than that I have been flirted with by less men than woman do Tyrion Lannister (I feel you, man). It's actually a big dent in my self-esteem (seriously). I have men stutter nervously when speaking to me or fall off the treadmill when I walk by (pretty funny actually), but there must be something very disturbing about me that nobody ever tries to woo me seriously except for hubby. This is kind of why I don't like Yoh and I drool over Mik. If only there's one (!) man in my life who tries so hard to get me openly even if he's ugly, that would make me feel like Cinderella!

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Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 31 2011, 01:22:33 UTC
Some ppl tell me this too, but not the lack of courage that stops them, rather the ego. Men can't deal with rejection and will only woo a woman they think they're capable of getting to save their ego. I would believe in this theory that for a handsome man/pretty woman the chance of rejection is high because 1. Most likely he/she is taken. 2.Being pretty means she/he can choose therefore standard must be high 3. He/she must be difficult to get. But if this is true then why do other pretty girls get the flowers on valentines and I don't and why men with assets don't look at me either? I figure there's something else to it, and that is fear of rejection/ego because even the girls I know all say I look 'inaccessible', and my standard for men is not high but hard to meet since it's due to length of hair, I rarely give any man with sort hair a second glance. My conclusion though, I find it frustrating that 1.If a man truly likes me he should try to go for it even if I already have a BF 2. If a man truly likes me he should keep trying and trying rejections after rejections 3.everything good in this world is bloody hard to get. Mikhail is a dream come true. His assets may have something to do with it, but not every man with assets likes a challenge and is persistent or dedicated. I don't think Mik gives a second thought whether the one he wants is taken, he fears no rejection enough to go after the hardest one to get just because he must have him/her, and he's bold enough to get down on his knees and sing an opera in the middle of Times Square to woo someone and still find no dent in his self-esteem when the person tries to smack him in the middle of the crowd for it.

Now for Yoh, I totally understand your story and the resemblence to Yoh which is why you love him so. I do believe that Yoh has the dedication and guts, don't get me wrong, those are his greatest assets, what he lacks, I don't know how to explain, but if you put Mik's personality in Yoh's shoes things will turn out very differently. For one thing i find him to be indecisive - not knowing exactly what he wants or knows it but can't choose between pride, duty, and love or he thinks too much (like you did) and follows his head rather than his heart. And there is nothing wrong with it, it's a wiser thing to do really, and this way you save yourself from trouble and heartache. I'm just a bit more extreme like Mik, I'm more likely to choose the path I know will hurt me if I could just get a glimpse of paradise rather than live safely and have a so-so life experience. I have no prejudice with Yoh, not anymore anyway. And I like him a lot now actually. But you can see why, while I understand completely how Yoh feels and sympathize with him, he will never be enough for me. He is a pretty secluded beach on earth you will feel safe and happy with for the rest of your life - a wiser match and what most people would choose, Mikhail and Fei is the Maldives or Bora Bora - The paradise you can only glimpse maybe once or twice in your life after working your ass off for about 10 years just to be there for 5 days - paradise most ppl look at the pricetag and say "lol, like I'll ever get to go" and throw the poster away. Me, I look at it everyday and swore to myself that even if I have to steal, I will see it before I die. Mikhail is an extremely dangerous character to get involved with, like Del said, if he doesn't love Fei he will hurt him more than Asami is capable of and that's why a lot of people don't trust him. But if he does,'if' he does, Fei will not just be safe and happy, he'll be in paradise!

.....actually right now, it just so happens that I'm broke and I must settle for Yoh while I save for Mik. No Kenya/Zanzibar this year T_T going to Krabi for 2 nights next month, still I'm thankful for Yoh ^_^ I need my beach.

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Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 31 2011, 02:45:33 UTC
Lol are you goin on vacation? Where?

Well, look at me, heartache, tears, a cheating husband and a disease. All marriage are miserable at some point and several times no matter who you choose I think, you just have to do the math, and if good times exceeds the bad, it's worth it to me.

"My Posession?" you mean I have a "taken" sign on my forehead? I've always thought it was "short hair, sodd off!"

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