[fic] Retribution Four

Jun 25, 2011 16:15

I don't believe my failure....6 months of no update. T_T Really, I'd be amazed if there're still people reading this (please let me know if you still are). But here it is anyway ( Read more... )

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euphory June 25 2011, 18:38:48 UTC
Whenever Yan and Phillip appear together in a chapter, I can't help but hope "why don't you two just get together and spare everyone else??!!"

Anyways, I hope Feilong strikes back hard and vicious. Underestimate him is a huge mistake to make.

He is, after all, the person who single-handedly revitalized Baishe in his early 20s. He's only 28 and already achieved so much (whereas Asami was still a "contractor" when he was 28). He must have a lot abilities to stay in such a position.

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 00:25:19 UTC
Lol, I keep thinking that too XD But they are kind of together in a way.

I'm sure Fei is capable of breathing fire and everyone will burn. But I also believe Fei has emotional problems to overcome before he can win. When daddy died he didn't even try to seek revenge and he wasn't even angry, just sad. Yan is kind of right, Fei's weakness is that he doesn't know what he wants. Until he does, he can't win. I've written this story to lead Fei to his emotional breakthrough, most of all over Asami. So that's going to happen, and then I will need to go learn Kung Fu ASAP to write Fei kicking ass XD

Thank you so much for the comment. It really helps to see that people are still reading. I hope the next chapter will not disappoint.

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euphory June 26 2011, 02:57:18 UTC
Or he can someone (his many subordinates) do the dirty work for him. After all, Fei is a leader!

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 23:39:07 UTC
No no no, I want to see Fei in action XD And I think Fei would want to beat the shit out of Toh with his own hands!!

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euphory June 27 2011, 02:43:07 UTC
haha, agreed!
(one of my biggest secret fantasy is to have Feilong beat up Asami... *ducks rocks from Asami fans*). I think in the comics he clearly is able to do so, but he is only willing to hurt Asami only a little, whereas Asami has no problem to hurt him a lot.
Actually I think Asami is the type of guy who is willing to throw anyone under the bus if his interests are threatened. But then again, we are talking about a romance novel style manga...

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kajornwan June 27 2011, 02:56:52 UTC
.....Fei Long beating up Asami ... I think you just gave me a great plot *gets shot by Asami fans too*

But that's what I thought. Fei is indecisive and has no will to hurt anyone that much. I want to see him breakthrough it, finds out what he really wants, and really kick ass when ppl get in his ways.

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