[fic] Cruel Intentions: Retribution Three

Jan 11, 2011 15:12

Title: Retribution Three
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Major angst + Tragedy
Characters: Fei Long, Alexei, Yoh
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399
Previous Chapters: On the side bar of my lj kajornwan

TRANSLATIONS UPDATE: CI (first arc) is now being translated into Polish by yoan_chan *hugs*. The first chapter is finished ( Read more... )

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portisheart January 11 2011, 17:07:16 UTC
yeah right.. you and no writing skills, sucking etc *snort*. i'll kindly inform you that i've seen far worse writing and plotting in many of those m/m ebooks i'm dl everywhere! ^^
me too i'd love to make movies.. *sigh*. this said, try to find a real 3D fei Long worth his 2D counterpart.. might take months of scanning the best model agencies in china or the next asian countries..

i must be the absolute one-paragraph killer-writer! maybe i should start writing one-paragraph fics instead of the ones lying halfwritten and dusty in my pc fanfic folder - at least this'd satisfy my addiction to procrastination XDDD
well, the honor of writing your summary would be entirely mine ^^.

ruining everyone's life.. okaaaay. now i really wonder and cringe!
but as this still is a m/m fic, don't make the angst too "bottomless" - pun intended ~
hm.. as today was my last free day, i stayed glued to the comp reading smut and instead of cooking i had a packet of crackers for lunch *gets fat* xDD

dunno about sanity.. many artists were all sick, mad, or addicted - take Van Gogh, Beethoven, most writers *LOL*

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kajornwan January 12 2011, 03:45:29 UTC
Well, writing is hard for me, truly. I often feel suffocated and frustrated when trying to write the scenes in my head that i have in such big details and my words don't seem to do them justice. Movies would have been best!! XD But yeah, finding actors would be so hard. Solution is to just do 3D animation XD''

Actually, you are the absolute one-paragraph killer. I keep wanting to read your fics after seeing how beautifully you write in your comments but I have no time to read much these days. *Cries* I've missed so many Fei fics lately and it's such a crime *kicks self*

but as this still is a m/m fic, don't make the angst too "bottomless" - pun intended ~
LOL I will try, though I still don't see an opening in this arc at this point (pun-intended)T_T

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portisheart January 12 2011, 09:20:14 UTC
are you one of those ppl who think about 3D animation "anyway, the computer does it all"? LOL.. i did a bit of 3D, and honestly, just getting Fei Long to walk with a bit of grace would be even harder as finding an actor xDDD

don't worry. my meanwhile over 1 year not updated fic is patiently waiting and catching dust, and the other 3chp finished one won't get away either ^^

sure, any smex right now would be utterly disturbing somehow..

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kajornwan January 14 2011, 05:35:21 UTC
anyway, the computer does it all"
Actually I am *is ashamed* And I should know better, being in the field of both graphic design and programming. I guess I was just hoping there's some awesome technology out there?

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portisheart January 14 2011, 06:32:40 UTC
see.. you're 10x more professional than i am LOL - is there anything you can't do besides writing, programming, graphic design, drawing..?? xDDD

there is.. magic ^^

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kajornwan January 14 2011, 07:15:55 UTC
It's funny you should say that. My friends back in high school once said "Oh, Faye can do just about anything, but you can throw a ball at her and she'll turn into a pathetic idiot!" Well, I am incapable of playing *any* sport that involves flying objects of any kind LOL And my driving sucks, I get lost, and I'm chicken shit in RL XD

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portisheart January 15 2011, 10:42:20 UTC
nice try.. even so, you manage to be the better "idiot" xD.. i suck at *any* sport with or without balls, the only vehicle i can drive is my bicycle, during 1 year schooling in the big metropole here (must be like totally provincial abroad LOL), i got lost in the train station.. and in RL i'm chicken too - shit, wings and eggs! Faye, you're a genius, accept it! xDDD

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kajornwan January 15 2011, 11:17:11 UTC
LOL The thing is, I don't just suck at *any* sport with balls, I can't play at all. I have a phobia of flying objects. I have been known to fall on the floor, cover my head, and cry for mommy if you throw a ball at me or within 5 meters of me T__T And yeah, I suck in all other kinds of sports (perhaps except horseback riding - is that one?) And YAY! I'm not the only one got lost in the train station! Actually I once took the bus from the wrong side and still managed to sit there till the end of the line going "heh? Where is my stop?" *face palms*

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portisheart January 15 2011, 11:37:00 UTC
ok, the phobia is another thing.. not funny at all. something must've happened as you were a kid..?

horse riding??? gawd. another proof you're just tops *LOL*. i keep a safe distance from those huge creatures, and i discovered that they make me sneeze&cough as well..
imagine that: is it getting embarrassing when you have to facepalm because after 10 months of crossing the station weekly, you still go "heh? where is my exit?" 0_o

you can say what you want my dear, every time you try to put yourself down, you come up with something else where you just rule xDD

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