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kajornwan

[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 13

Jul 12, 2010 21:19

Six months without an update.. I should be slaughtered. But I'm back, and I hope to be able to update faster now that muse is back otherwise it'll take a decade to finish this fic ^^!. To make up for it, here's the longest chapter I've ever written. ^_ ( Read more... )

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juicybo0 July 30 2010, 17:49:15 UTC

omg this chapter killed me T______T
fei SERIOUSLY has some MAJOR making up to do towards misha :(
poor misha... he's the victim amongst all that mess.
his relationship with fei just keeps getting more and more confusing...
supposedly fei already admitted to himself that hes in love with misha but all this mess ugh jsdhjhlejgh and his stupid infatuation with asami... stupidstupidstupid :(
there needs to be more scene with fei being the victim instead! be jealous more fei! lols. his period of time being jealous was wayyyy to short. again, poor mish

juicybo0 July 30 2010, 17:55:31 UTC

ps: i dont think i would really mind if this fic didnt end in the typical fei x misha... because fei is SO STUPID in this fic T_____T stupid fei! stop hurting misha! ugh sjklfhldkfjgh... poor misha... he should go back to his fiance who really loves him... unlike fei who keeps betraying him and whos feelings towards him keep changing... sigh

juicybo0 July 30 2010, 17:59:34 UTC

a gone with the wind ending would kinda fit...haaa...just saying. :P my heart BLEEDS for misha!!

kajornwan July 31 2010, 04:14:26 UTC

Gone with the wind ending? hmmmm I'm afraid the ending might be more severe, but that depends on which version you'd pick to read. I intend to have two ^_^

juicybo0 August 2 2010, 15:31:37 UTC

oh yay :D i was hoping for that! (2 endings i mean) hahaha. hmmm, something more severe sounds good too as long as misha doesnt continue suffering T____T hahaha

kajornwan July 31 2010, 04:11:41 UTC

he should go back to his fiance who really loves him...

Oh he's about to (and regret it), and Fei is going to learn a huge lesson. But aww don't say that, he's not stupid. I think he's just confused and doesn't know what he wants. I suppose this is where the saying "you dont' know what you have until it's gone" comes in ^_^ We all make that mistake, no?

juicybo0 August 2 2010, 15:33:16 UTC

:( i feel bad for the fiance... and misha of course. didnt fei already learn that lesson when he saw misha with his fiance? which also made him sleep with mishas brother? i guess people just dont learn from mistakes theyve only made once.... twice should do it haha

kajornwan July 31 2010, 04:08:48 UTC

Actually, yes, Fei seriously has some MAJOR making up to do XD One day it will hit him what he had lost and then we'll see a new Fei. But the thing is, Fei hasn't really admitted (not fully anyway) that he loves Mikhail. Mikhail knows this all along, and feared this all along but stayed anyway. But I think it's both poor Fei and poor Mik though. Fei has suffered a lot and he doesn't know how to make himself happy yet *hugs him* so in a lot of ways, I think he is suffering from this too. But thank you for stopping by and commenting. I'm really glad to hear some response ^_^ *hugs*

juicybo0 August 2 2010, 15:36:10 UTC

i thought the cartier necklave, bracelet pair thingy made fei admit his love for misha? well at least made him aware? misha doesnt know what fei feels for him at all because after the brother incident eveything else just happened @.@ and distracted fei once more sigh. well, i do feel bad for fei about the whole asami deal, but he has misha whos RIGHT THERE djkfhglsh T_T

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