[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 13
Six months without an update.. I should be slaughtered. But I'm back, and I hope to be able to update faster now that muse is back otherwise it'll take a decade to finish this fic ^^!. To make up for it, here's the longest chapter I've ever written. ^_
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And yet, he didn't understand the severity of his actions. He didn't fully grasp his importance to Mikhail.
You are so right. Fei grasped nothing but his own pain. An insecure person is selfish in a way and this is Fei's major flaw and the problem that will forever keep him from being happy unless someone slaps him to his senses. But dont' get me wrong, I love Fei because of his flaws or else I'd be Aki's fan, so by that statement I'm not condemning him or anything. But I do see this as a real problem that has to be fixed and Fei does need some fixing before he would allow himself to be happy. And being as strong and stubborn as he is, I believe it takes one hell of a punch, if not several, to get him to see it, rather than a sweet puppy talk. The Fei I love is very strong with one hell of a determination which is why he's such a vivid character, so if he could be 'puppy-talked' or showered with love to change, then he's not as strong as I would like him to be. So in the end, I think it was necessary to put him through these events and trauma - to show off his strength really. Fei can take it, and he just doesn't give up no matter what.
I'm totally with you on NT (and I don't think YA will be continuing Fei's story the way we would like to see either). Yoh stole the show in NT and I was left with ,"this isn't about Fei or even FOR Fei, it's about showing off Yoh's quality when with that space she could have given Fei something to take home with, for example a good talk with Asami to end this and move on. I could totally understand why Fei said to Yoh, "even that gets on my nerve." I mean, hell, yeah. I could see Fei thinking "WTF?, I'm heartbroken, I've lost face, I've just wasted 7 damn years of my life for nothing and I'm a total loser, and you have the nerve to ask me to end your life so you can die with honor? I don't bloody have any bloody energy to deal with anyone else's shit right now? And you who betrayed me should live a long miserable life swimming in guilt!" *gets shot by Yoh x Fei fans* But lol, I would have been seriously pissed if I were Fei. And Mikhail was lame too, for just leaving without a word. And I'm bloody going to fix that. I'm going to fix Yoh too so that he loves Fei more and not just his bloody pride and promise!
--end of rant--
*gets bricked by all*
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