[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 12

[kajornwan]

OMG I have been gone for two months!!! *gomen* But this chapter has been done for a while before I left for Italy, and when my dear beta abandoned me because she's so busy right now *hugs her* I kind of feel a bit unconfident about posting on my own T_T But anyway, here it is and I have to get back to work *cries some more

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[kajornwan]

To answer your first question, no I don't think Fei was planning to get them all in the manga. I'm twisting the facts to my liking here. As you know I'm terribly disappointed about how Fei abandoned all his strength and will in NT to become somewhat of a saint, melting over Akihito's words and appearing so powerless. So if I have a chance of rewriting that here in my own world, I will. I love my evil, passionate Fei and I want to give him the control back and show that Fei too can or at least plan to pull some strings. And I think my Mikhail knows Fei too well that he realizes this in an instant because he loves this passionate and stubborn Fei who's always driven by his heart and his love. But that's just my preference on how I'd like to see NT be done differently. ^__^

I'm glad you caught Mik's jealousy and him understanding Fei so well. I think Fei needs someone who loves him for who he is and will tell him to 'just do what you want' for once in his life. I know Fei does what he wants most of the time especially when he's jealous, but Asami judges him too much and I wanted Mik to be different.

Over Fei and Yan, you are right that it affects Fei a lot and it shows. To me I think Fei loves Yan very much as a brother, and the greatest thing about Fei is the fact that when he loves someone, he loves very strongly and extremely. So I did want to show this side of Fei that he might be cold and evil in general, but in love he is delicate. But of course I will try not to belittle him in front of Yan. The point of introducing Yan was to give Fei a chance to correct the bad feeling he used to feel in Yan's presence and perhaps find his self-respect at long last.

I'm not sure how detailed I'm going to write about the exchange. Gotta find a way to not copy the whole manga's conversation XD

Thanks for the comment and for still reading. *hugs*