[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 12

[kajornwan]

OMG I have been gone for two months!!! *gomen* But this chapter has been done for a while before I left for Italy, and when my dear beta abandoned me because she's so busy right now *hugs her* I kind of feel a bit unconfident about posting on my own T_T But anyway, here it is and I have to get back to work *cries some more

Comments

[char_comet]

Sorry if, before telling you any other things, I have a pressing question to ask you that came to my mind the same instant I finished to read the chapter: do you really think that Fei Long went to the exchange with the purpose of getting them all - the deed, the boy, and Asami? or you simply made "your" Mikhail think so because, even if he trusts Fei Long, he is so jealous and afraid of having Fei harmed when that man is involved?
Actually I don't think Fei Long wanted to cheat on Asami and that he really was going to give Akihito back (Fei could do it even without the "excuse" of having in return the deed when this one wasn't stolen yet!)
It's true that he could have been curious to see/meet Asami but, in my opinion, Mikhail made the wrong move (wrong with the meaning that he misunderstood Fei's intentions) even if - someway - it finished to give the three of them the chance to meet and talk.
Oh but I like this jealous Mikhail when he's overacting because Fei Long is the most important thing of his life and I like his being able to know what Fei Long needs or doesn't (even if he loses his way when jealousy blinds his eyes and "damages" his brain XDD)
Talking of Fei Long and Yan's meeting after so many years... even if Fei Long is undoubtedly an emotional guy and Yan is his older brother and he still feels a strong bond with him (especially because Yan someway makes him think of their father), I hope he will soon be able to not be so remissive towards him because even if he didn't want to show his weakness I think both Yan and Toh noticed it: sometimes when you make a show of your strength or indifference it's because you feel the opposite...

So what can we expect now? Can I ask you if you're going to tell about the whole exchance thing or you will skip it?

[kajornwan]

To answer your first question, no I don't think Fei was planning to get them all in the manga. I'm twisting the facts to my liking here. As you know I'm terribly disappointed about how Fei abandoned all his strength and will in NT to become somewhat of a saint, melting over Akihito's words and appearing so powerless. So if I have a chance of rewriting that here in my own world, I will. I love my evil, passionate Fei and I want to give him the control back and show that Fei too can or at least plan to pull some strings. And I think my Mikhail knows Fei too well that he realizes this in an instant because he loves this passionate and stubborn Fei who's always driven by his heart and his love. But that's just my preference on how I'd like to see NT be done differently. ^__^

I'm glad you caught Mik's jealousy and him understanding Fei so well. I think Fei needs someone who loves him for who he is and will tell him to 'just do what you want' for once in his life. I know Fei does what he wants most of the time especially when he's jealous, but Asami judges him too much and I wanted Mik to be different.

Over Fei and Yan, you are right that it affects Fei a lot and it shows. To me I think Fei loves Yan very much as a brother, and the greatest thing about Fei is the fact that when he loves someone, he loves very strongly and extremely. So I did want to show this side of Fei that he might be cold and evil in general, but in love he is delicate. But of course I will try not to belittle him in front of Yan. The point of introducing Yan was to give Fei a chance to correct the bad feeling he used to feel in Yan's presence and perhaps find his self-respect at long last.

I'm not sure how detailed I'm going to write about the exchange. Gotta find a way to not copy the whole manga's conversation XD

Thanks for the comment and for still reading. *hugs*