BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON

[kaiwynn]

MEND THE FAILBOAT.

After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?

Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.

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the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

He barely registers what he hears anymore.

The only image is that of Bella, on the brink of dying.
All he does is think about her.

His world, as unresolved as ever, still functions primarily around her well being.

He falls to his knees, begs to the sky (never to God; he let him and now he will never believe again) that she gets better.

He didn't bother to hear what someone else was begging for.

-

She holds her breath for as long as she can underwater.

Three minutes has been her most.

She runs her fingers through her (now wet) matted hair, silently cursing to herself.

Why am I still here?It seemed rational, the time she was escaping Sam, the master puppeteer who cut her strings and left her broken on the floor

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[kaiwynn]

Just enough to show that's something is there.

BECAUSE IT IS. you've captured jacob/leah perfectly in this. ohh, they should have been canon... D:

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

I wanted Jacob and Leah soooooooooo bad.

I kept waiting for something, ANYTHING, but no.

SMEYER IS FULL OF DAMN FAIL.

MJackson might enjoy this book though.

Quil/Claire
Nessie/Jacob

Yup, his style.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[kaiwynn]

I KNOW. I WAS GETTING ALL EXCITED TOO. you know, thinking, jacob/leah would be the only thing to redeem this book.

noooo.

lol yes smeyer is clearly a closet pedophile. it's a leettle odd.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

Seriously.
But smeyer apparently has no imagination.

I also hated the fade-to-black sex scenes.
UGH.

I'm thinking of writing a Kate/Garret one.
I actually liked their budding relationship.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[kaiwynn]

lol especially honeymoon night. it was really abrupt.

kate/garrett was really cute. i thought it was interesting how kate got the most character development -- not tanya.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

Was she naked when they were at the beach? I didn't get that part, ahah.

I'm sort of glad that she didn't develop Tanya because I like the bitchy yet seductive Tanya more than what I guess would have been a nice Tanya in smeyer's eyes.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[kaiwynn]

yeah i had to reread it several times. she was naked.

yes! that's true. i'm glad she didn't mess with my fanon!tanya :) just funny, after all the fandom hype and wank.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

Hahah.
I love your fanon!tanya.

I feel like writing something.
But I don't know what ship, ahah.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[kaiwynn]

yes write something!

umm...i have lots of ships. >.>

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

I jsut wrote Tanya/Jasper; Tanya/Edward

Tell me what you think :D

http://community.livejournal.com/twiriginal/58499.html

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[lostpoisoned]

THIS IS WHAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED.

So adorable. I loved it.

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

thank you!

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[yoursolace]

djkhdkjhgd OMG LOVE. <3

Re: the lives we tangled ourselves in- jacob/leah-pg

[nuits_froides]

THANK YOU BB<3