Title: The Only Thing That's Real Author: kaitlia777 Author's e-mail/website: kaitlia777@yahoo.com Fandom: Castle Summary: Picks up where Knockout ended
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I'm glad to see this, because I have a feeling we'll skip to 'three months later' or something when the show returns.
I think Ryan and Esposito will be indulging in some more comfort after this fic, be it drinks on the way home, or more...
My only minor quibble is the 'recovery position'; this isn't something like a heart attack or drowning, but a traumatic injury; there's no telling if there might be a spinal injury and so I'd have thought that keeping the airway clear, pressure on the accessible wound, and keeping patient movement to a minimum would be top priorities. On the other hand, the exit wound would benefit from pressure being applied too. Plus I'm no med student, so I'm just guessing :P
Oh, and I really like the idea of the automated rifle and Javi's thought that it's easier when criminals aren't that smart :D
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Great story! I wish this is how it all goes down in the new ep ;)
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They need to support each other :)
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And like everyone else: Liked the cast-centric-ness of it. Loved that you wrote it from Alexis's point of view too!
I like the fact that the one theme running through both the POVs is the utter shock over the whole situation! Very realistic.
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I think Ryan and Esposito will be indulging in some more comfort after this fic, be it drinks on the way home, or more...
My only minor quibble is the 'recovery position'; this isn't something like a heart attack or drowning, but a traumatic injury; there's no telling if there might be a spinal injury and so I'd have thought that keeping the airway clear, pressure on the accessible wound, and keeping patient movement to a minimum would be top priorities. On the other hand, the exit wound would benefit from pressure being applied too. Plus I'm no med student, so I'm just guessing :P
Oh, and I really like the idea of the automated rifle and Javi's thought that it's easier when criminals aren't that smart :D
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