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kaisTitle: EXO'S 11
Pairings: Kai/D.O, side: surprise pairings
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 9,110
Warnings: Rimming, a bit of dirty talk
Summary: Big easy money never did come as easily as its name suggests.
Author’s Note: SO THIS IS BASICALLY OCEAN’S 11 ADOPTED TO THE KAISOO FANDOM. Sorry if I failed OTL. I loved the movie and I could only hope I
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“But it’s never been tried.” Kyungsoo pipes in, leaning forward as he feels Jongin’s hand rest on his right knee.
this is the first line to make my stomach jerk bC SEXUAL TENSION EYS
“Look, we go way back. I owe you one from that incident with the guy and the plane and the snakes-and I’ll never forget it.”
IM ALUGHING i LVOE YOU
“Kim Minseok.”
“What about his nerves?”
“You mean this,” Jongin slouches and begins to shiver a bit. “D-do-D-don’t touch m-m-my stuff.”
IM LAUHGING HARDER DID I MENTION TAHT I LOVE YOu
i really like how a lot of the dialogue is the same from the movie??? I LOVE IT??? it makes the fic feel so fricking authentic im gonna rewatch the movie after i finish (bc im typing this as i read)
Jongin looks at Kyungsoo and sees the relief flashing in his eyes, can’t help but swoop down to capture his white-washed lips in an affectionate kiss.MY ( ... )
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The movie is awesome and i loved it too much to shake it up RE:ITS ALREADY PURE GENIUS AND IT CAN'T GET ANY MORE GENIUS THAN THAT
I ALSO TRIED HARD TO MAKE THE SEXUAL TENSION WORK BEC THAT'S WHAT YOU WANTED ohohohoh but i think i did well bec i made your tummy flip yES
Woah this is actually my first time eveeeeeeeeeer to write actual smut (let alone yaoi) so yish it means a lot to me and my writer ego that you liked the smut
AND WOW I DIDN'T KNOW YOU LIKED DIRTY TALKING LIKE i just thought it would fit in with their personalities ehe heeeeeeeeeeeh
PLEASE DONT DIE Hahaha
YEAY And im happy to write for you!! your prompts are awesome and you're very VERY welcome!!
i'm really glad you liked it =)))))))
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if ever i'd get you as my recipient again somewhere someday i'd always be glad to write for you!!!
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I'm wheezing because i think u rly made it work ;A;
And kyungsoo and jongin's characterization are so so fantastic! Bossy kyungsoo is my headcanon! And i really liked how even though jongin might be wary of kyungsoo's plans he still goes through with it all because cmon who wouldn't follow kyungsoo right???? And plus wow can we talk abt jongin fucking kyungsoo during the day of the robbery itself like oh my god ;_____ ( ... )
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you commented on my fic ehehehey do i know you form somewhere
YEAY! I'm glad bec you said i made it work I TRIED SO HARD PLUS I ALSO LOVED THE MOVIE SO YES Ego booster and it made me so happy thank you!!!!
p.swould you believe me if i told you that smut was my first time to write actual smut ohohoho IM GLAD YOU FOUND IT HOT THank you /bows, throws kaisoo's used condoms MEHEHE
Sexual tension was impt bec that's what my lovely recipient kais wanted SO LIKE I THOUGHT OF WAYS TO MAKE INNOCENT THINGS TURN INTO SEXUAL TENSION OHOHOHOHOH
thank you again! i was so worried this looks like it was rushed specially around the parts of the robbery to the end so thank yoooou ; ;
ohohoho i'm actually not active in lj bec idk how to post or how fic posting works here tbh so i throw all my fics in my aff account but if you want to talk to me please do!!
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"Ten should do it, don't you think?"
"You think we need one more?"
"You think we need one more."
"Okay, we'll get one more."
FAVE SCENE IN THE ENTIRE MOVIE AND YOU NAILED IT WITH JONGIN EATING CHICKEN
THIS IS PERFECTION. ALL OF IT.
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OHOHOHOHO
THANK YOOOOOOOU!!!
I put a lot of work in this fic and i'm so glad you loved/like it ; w ;
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KYUNGSOO AND JONGIN ARE BOTH SO BADASS AND THEY FIT EACH OTHER SO PEFECTLY
also sexual frustation hell yEAH
and idk why i really liked baekhyun here, the characterization is beautiful ;;;
THIS IS AWESOME, THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS
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YUP THE SEXUAL FRUSTRATION IS IMPT BEC THAT'S WHAT MY RECIPIENT WANTED im so glad you guys noticed it ; ;
ACTUALLY MY FAVE CHARACTER HERE IS BAEKHYUN TOO HELL YEAH UP TOP o///
OMG THANK /YOU/ FOR READING THIS YOU ARE AWESOME TOO <3
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