(for xiujaemin) Let My Star Rise on Your Night

[parkourdeer]

For: xiujaemin
Title: Let My Star Rise on Your Night
Pairings: Kai/D.O
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4.7k
Summary: Kyungsoo sings and Jongin is learning how to rule a country.
Author’s Note: Thank you so much for your lovely prompts and I hope you will like this fic! <3

Comments

[chenminhun]

i really wish that this fic is longer because i feel like more could have been written about how jongin falls in love ;;; but that being said, i think you have written a complete fic even though it is not thousands of words long so that's a skill in itself <3 i like how this fic is succinct too, the words used are simple and yet you manage to drive your point across.

jealous jongin is so ;____; i really like how you write his jealousy as not being too over the top or possessive/obsessive! he's so cute in this fic and how kyungsoo snaps at him and the hurt

“Contrary to what the fucking media says, I am not fucking any of my members.” There is hurt in his voice because Jongin hears the slight quiver and he knows it’s not just the fatigue. THIS PART ;;_________;;

apart from my chansoo question, i'm not sure if they're boyfriends like you've written towards the end of the fic? since they are married... so if you don't mind clarifying lmao ;;

uh i have nothing else to add but the fact that i enjoyed reading this fic and i definitely would want a longer one out of this!!! ALL HAIL PRINCE JONGIN <33333