(for xiujaemin) Let My Star Rise on Your Night

Aug 27, 2014 15:15

For: xiujaemin
Title: Let My Star Rise on Your Night
Pairings: Kai/D.O
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~4.7k
Summary: Kyungsoo sings and Jongin is learning how to rule a country.
Author’s Note: Thank you so much for your lovely prompts and I hope you will like this fic! <3

Let My Star Rise on Your Night )

rating: nc17, !fic, !justkaisoo, pairing: kai/d.o

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taoqtpies August 31 2014, 08:05:32 UTC
this is written so beautifully i really cannot find the words to relay my love for what i had read because no words can match the way YOU worded this entire story!!! from the beginning when you described jongin's reluctance for his title to his friends and then finally to marrying kyungsoo and falling in love with him... i feel as though there is much more to this fic that hasn't been told so i definitely would want a longer fic out of this!!!

i love the part when kaisoo made love, it wasn't full of smut but it's sounded so loving and romantic and soft, is that even a word to describe it hahaha but yes, you wrote that scene so well!!!

“I think I might love you,” Kyungsoo sighs, when they are done. He has an arm thrown against Jongin’s chest as he snuggles closer. “If you can stop acting like you’re so cool."

“Yeah?” Jongin says but Kyungsoo is already snoring away, softly. He ignores the sinking feeling in his chest at the words, trying not to hurt too much because Jongin knows he has already fallen in love with Kyungsoo.

He’s not that forgiving, though, when he says, “Of course, I know that you swing both ways.”

“Only towards you,” Jongin counters, smirking when Kyungsoo rolls his eyes. “I swing towards you.” I CACKLED SO HARD AT THIS JONGIN IS SO WHIPPED HAHHAHAHAHA

hope to see more of this!!!

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certainangles September 30 2014, 13:17:53 UTC
I AM SO ;___; flattered and relieved by this comment hehehehe thank you for reading and leaving me this LOVELY COMMENT <3 you're so kind with your words sobs i'm not all THAAAAAT good but i try!!! thank you once again <3

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