(for justangel) sekh ma shieraki anni

[parkourdeer]

For: justangel
Title: sekh ma shieraki anni
Pairings: Kai/D.O
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5.8k
Warnings: Mpreg, char!death, slight!gore, slight!abuse, mentions slavery
Summary: Kyungsoo counts the stars on Kai's skin and watches the sun in his eyes while Kai runs his finger over Kyungsoo's bottom lip like he holds the moon in his mouth. Together they build

Comments

[justangel]

Ok let me start ranting on how much i love this fic.

First of all, i love the narration. An opening scene with the two of them waking up in the morning, being happy with just the two of the, is perfect. It took me only a few sentence to get to understand how much kaisoo is in love with each other. And how you distinct between kai and jongin, and how kyungsoo is the only one who get to know both, is so endearing.

At first, i honestly expected that this fic would revel much on the phase where kyungsoo fought to win kai's love, and i've prepared myself for the broken heart. But it turned out differently. My second fear is the character death; there is one in the warning, and I told myself 'you asked for it'. I proceeded with an extra cautions, waiting for the moment where Kai would die, BUT HE SURVIVED THE STORY!! AND THE SON!!!! KAISOO'S SON OMG!!! PRAISE THE LORD!!

I wish it were longer, or telling a more comprehensive chronicle of kaisoo's journey. I'm seeeing the potential of this fic becoming one of those legendary au fic that will leave everyone in awe and talk about it for years to come. But never mind, it''s just my greediness. Besides, long or short, this fic is already so special to me nonetheless. I couldn't ask for more.

I'm waiting for the reveal so I can thank you properly for this, dear author. I was lucky I got you. Thank you very much for the nice conclusion for my summer ♡