(for avellkyungsoo) it starts with an 'f'

Sep 08, 2015 15:00

❊ for: avellkyungsoo
❊ title: it starts with an 'f'
❊ pairings: kai/d.o
❊ rating: pg13
❊ word count: ~5.8k
❊ summary: a bond is tied a lot simpler than it seems
❊ a/n: I apologize

it starts with an 'f' )

rating: pg13, !fic, !justkaisoo, pairing: kai/d.o

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avellkyungsoo September 9 2015, 04:07:09 UTC
HI. First of all thank you for writing for me! Ahh it's really an adorable 5k fluff :3333 okay let me start.

This fic feels close to home??? Why?? I am an architecture student and that technical drawing subject...omg. All those small details of triangles and t-square and the erasure dusts ahhh they're all coming back to me. Also the stoichio! Huhu high school. Anyway also thank you for including baeksoo ahhhh I love them as enemies or friends together. And i hope a friendship has ensued for them since kyungsoo went to his party? And looool i find it very entertaining that kyungsoo has small number of friends lol i really love his i-don't-care character in this fic.

Kyungsoo writing fanfics and striving to improve omg :(((((( I am very glad that he got featured and got a boyfriend in the end lol. I'm happy for him that he has developed and improved throughout his journey of being a fanfic writer. Sighs i wish i will improve as well!

I really like the part where jongin discusses kyungsoo's fic revisions? Like wow jongin, you're very honest and i like that. This is why we gotta love our betas!! Catastrophic ink made bloodbath lol i love it when he says there's more room for improvement. You've showed that jongin is very professional yeah despite his manly crush with kyungsoo and thank you for that!

Omg i imagine kyungsoo under the evergreen trees. I love how you sprinkled small words in the scene because there's this vivid image formed in my head of a very fine and tranquil afternoon with an angelic kyungsoo sitting with his legs stretched and a notebook in his lap, thinking about scenes as he bites his pen ahhhhhhh omg i love that

And jongin reading kyungsoo's fanfic of prince of tennis lmaooo i wonder what his reaction was like? Is the fic OCxRyoma? Orrr is it a boyxboy... lmao it's really cute to imagine kyungsoo writing for himself as ryoma's love interest.

MY FAVORITE LINE
Jongin finds him, in the middle of the greenery like a lost little flower but Jongin doesn’t pick the flower and only admires him from afar. This is so sweet and adorable???? Yes kyungsoo is a very beautiful flower yes yes

I kind of wish there was more though ;----) and don't apologize. This is really adorable and cute. Thank you so much!

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