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rjaejoo September 2 2015, 23:25:07 UTC

This is fantastic, great job!

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avellkyungsoo September 28 2015, 15:38:59 UTC
Ahhh thank you for reading! <3

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i'm so excited~ ;u; latchedwindows September 3 2015, 02:51:34 UTC
i shall promptly go through all of my favorite parts. as i read. and as i re-read otl this is going to be so long, i'm sorry. ;u;

Kim Jongin does not travel a lot. But he leaps.
i'm so ready for this yes yes yes yes. also, what a lovely first line. good job, author-nim!

“Hangover?” Someone quips from behind-he knows who it is from the voice. Park Chanyeol, another apprentice who wishes to extend his skills and write-ups for resume.
CHANYEOLLLL~
ahem i'm sorry

Now, what’s the publisher’s name again? Do Kyungs-
oooOOOoooooOOOh is this foreshadowing i spy

His look does not falter when the man standing a meter away from him with his blaring auburn hair coughs, a hand rubbing his chest. Slowly, the man cracks his eyes open. Jongin deems the wide eyes startling.
this is kyungsoo with red hAIR??? only my favorite haircut of his EVER??? i need to know who you are because i need to give you my soul in exchange for this

“Do you fancy hair dyes?” Stupid mouth.
//squealing//

“Thank god you’re Korean.” Kyungsoo speaks in relief. He looks ( ... )

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avellkyungsoo September 28 2015, 15:45:24 UTC
I am so happy that the fic fits to your taste. I was worried that my plot might have went overboard beyond your prompt. Google really helped me through this, and some friends that have helped me brainstorm. Your prompts are a bit mysterious that honestly I had a hard time deciding which to write. But this genre I wrote is fresh and yes, I enjoyed writing it. Thank you so much for appreciating the fic! And yeah probably I wish I wrote this better!

<33

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amyleea September 4 2015, 01:00:54 UTC

THE PROMPT WAS AMAZING AND THE STORY WAS SOOOOOOOO BRILLIANT. OMG, IT'S BEEN SO LONG SINCE I FOUND A PERFECT PLOT LIKE THIS.

I'm sorry but i'm excited af. I'm literally secreaming rn, because djsjnskajaoannska. I couldn't say any coherent words to express my feeling, but i hope you understand that i really, really love this.

Screw EXO. I'll be your fangirl instead.

❤❤❤❤

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avellkyungsoo September 28 2015, 15:48:33 UTC
Oh my god this makes my heart go ahhhhh you never know how much this comment makes me happy.

I'm happy to see that reaction from anyone, Thank you so much for appreciating and yeah i love comments like this because I'm like that incoherent if I really like a certain fic lol thank you again! But i bet there are more brillant fics than this!

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wek9876 September 4 2015, 01:58:08 UTC

oh my god ! this is fantastic !

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avellkyungsoo September 28 2015, 15:49:14 UTC
Ayeeeee thank you for reading!

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harmonycordeil September 13 2015, 07:56:27 UTC
I really love fics with parallel worlds theme, it never fails to make my brain hurts in a good way. And I tend to get confused when there's a sudden change of timeline in a story but here i don't feel as confused as to the others because the flow of the story is so good and the changing of timeline feels natural without me asking 'Wait Whut?????'

I need to know you author-nim and grovel at you to please make more of this kind of fic TT^TT

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avellkyungsoo September 28 2015, 15:51:09 UTC
Tbh i don't think the flow of scene shifts are that smooth. Err thank you for liking that i guess! Maybe it isn't bad as I think. Thank you for reading! And i'm happy that you find this different from others!

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harmonycordeil October 4 2015, 08:13:13 UTC
but I find it real smooth haha and NO it's not bad

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