(for everyone) Lay Us Down

Sep 05, 2014 18:21

For: Everyone
Title: Lay Us Down
Pairings: Kai/D.O, non-romantic!Kai/Ravi, side!Xiumin/N
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,416
Warnings: implied!Character death, VIXX
Summary: A year is a long time without a Drift partner. (PacRim!AU)
Author’s Note: I hope this different cup of KaiSoo doesn't taste too bad! (Also, this has a lot of references to Pacific ( Read more... )

rating: pg13, with: vixx, !fic, pairing: kai/d.o

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purplepedro September 6 2014, 11:07:20 UTC
So I saw PacRim!AU and I freaked out because I LOVE PACRIM AUs BRING ON THE WHOLE BUFFET OF METAL SUITS AND MUTATED SPECIES but then this happened and Kyungsoo's already dead and everything is breaking my heart. It was fantastically written and I loved the layout by which you brought up all the past events and switched from everyone's POVs but.... heart shattering. It was really moving, and you got a good look into the relationships not only between KaiSoo but everyone else on the team as well, and in this kind of Au that is so important. You know they say the greatest act of love is giving up your life for another and, hey! Look what Kyungsoo did. You can tell how close they were despite Kyungsoo not really being alive in the fic. I'm just gonna twiddle my fingers and imagine a very extensive, happy, romantic prequel because Jongin and Kyungsoo's characters here were perfect and I'm not letting them go so easily ;; Anyway, brilliant fic!

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stars_in_love September 23 2014, 01:33:16 UTC
Agh! Thank you ;; I don't know what else to say but thank you ksjfgsjnfgk this is such a lovely review ;;;;;;
I actually had a very hard time dealing with this fic because I kept making myself rewrite and rewrite and rewrite parts of it because I was like hoW TO E MOTIONN???@$#$?? WHAT IS THAT??? And I worried a lot that it wouldn't come across correctly with enough development ;;; but I'm glad to hear it wasn't too bad omg :D

they totally had a romantic prequel

they'd have built their baby jaeger together

and argued about what to name her

and what color to paint her

/sniffs

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zeroseven_ September 8 2014, 12:26:41 UTC
i don't know why i still read this when it clearly said character death but somehow my stupid brain didn't catch up with my stupid eyes because stupidly i read this and i am upset.

UPSET! i'm like part angry-upset part sad-upset part upset at you part upset at myself UGH I'M SO DUMB WHY AM I SO UPSET BOOOOOOOOHICKEY

also, stupid self-sacrificing kyungsoo you selfless little shit you ugh

and also jongin x ladybug stuffed toy is my new otp the image is so cute with him hugging it to make him feel comfortable and secure ugh

and also you took my vixx fic virginity HOHOHO

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stars_in_love September 23 2014, 01:49:15 UTC
I'm sorry OTL but I'm actually not

KYUNGSOO IS ACTUALLY A PIECE OF POO HE TOTALLY DOUCHED HIS WAY INTO DEATH WITH HIS NOSE STUCK UP IN THE AIR LIKE "Y'ALL CAN'T STOP ME NOW I'M DOING SHIT FOR THE GREATER GOOD" I'm just kidding I love you Kyungsoo you were 500% less douchey than I described

Jongin x ladybug was totally spontaneous and unnecessary on my part but ;u; I'm glad you enjoyed it ;u;

Wow did I really uhuhuhu

Thank you for reading!

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rjaejoo January 25 2015, 16:48:18 UTC

And this breaks my heart.  I wanted angst this morning, but I think I may have bit off too much!  Good job.

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