(for chocoyeol) A Pocketful of Stardust
For: chocoyeol
Title: A Pocketful of Stardust
Pairings: Kai/D.O, minor!Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~8.2k
Warnings: Language, girl!Luhan, girl!Baekhyun, fluff, fantasy!au
Summary: Jongin enters the Faerie Realm in search of a fallen star and finds cranky, potty-mouthed Kyungsoo instead.
Author's Note: To my recipient, this was a fantastic ( Read more... )
Title: A Pocketful of Stardust
Pairings: Kai/D.O, minor!Chanyeol/Baekhyun
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~8.2k
Warnings: Language, girl!Luhan, girl!Baekhyun, fluff, fantasy!au
Summary: Jongin enters the Faerie Realm in search of a fallen star and finds cranky, potty-mouthed Kyungsoo instead.
Author's Note: To my recipient, this was a fantastic ( Read more... )
/wheezes/
Okay. Just to let you know, I read this on the train to uni and I was just laughing and trying not to look like a maniac. I loved the way you wrote it, the way it slightly followed the original yet had it's own amazing quirks.
"Ahhh, you mean Kim Jongdae's youngest daughter? I've been trying to put that out of my mind since you told me. I'll be honest with you, Jongin, her father is an utter prick and I fear that apples don't often fall far from the tree."
"Are you calling the woman I love a prick?!" Jongin asked in aggrieved tones.
Chanyeol being Jongin's dad was one thing, writing that was another. Luhan and Jongdae as pricks, it suits that family well I suppose!
KYUNGSOO FALLING FROM THE SKY BECAUSE "He must have flung it into the sky in some fit of insanity and I happened to be the unfortunate sod in its path. Curse that prick, whoever he is. May his armpits be infested with lice for the next two centuries for giving me a fractured leg" I LAUGHED SO HARD BECAUSE I CAN SEE KYUNGSOO SAYING THAT?? And the fact he has to repeatedly tell people he's not a rock. The story just kept getting better and better.
The kiss-- I think I must have looked like an octopus out of water? Just flailing around on the train carriage because the confession and the kiss and the lake and their shirtlessness and the kiss... Kyungsoo sparkling and lighting up makes him sound so ethereal, I want to see ;n; but also IT MADE JONGIN WANT MORE EEEEEE-- And then the fact they just waltzed back through the wall so simply only to have the sentries chase them.
"About that ... you won't have to worry about that seeing her as Luhan got married to that boy Sehun 5 days ago. It was all very sudden. Your mother thinks she's in the family way."
Chanyeol just breezing over the fact he found the LOVE OF HIS LIFE and doesn't even tell his son properly... Complete trust, Chanyeol, complete trust. Baekhyun sounds so pretty T_T I wanna look like a girl!Baekhyun. The subtle hints of ChanBaek and HunHan was nice, and the fact Luhan was kind of already doing the thing with Sehun y'know? Heheheh...
Again, I must have spazzed too much over this fic. Again, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING MY DAY! I'm going to go save this and read it over and over
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Again, thanks so much for coming up with the stardust prompt /clings to you. I claimed your prompts like 2 minutes after I received my pinch hitter email bc STARDUST AU like just try and hold me back LOL. I was so worried someone else would claim it I replied almost immediately - I think I scared the crap out of the mods orz.
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I'm so glad you had so much fun writing it and oh my god like I was so happy someone picked it??? Alot of my prompts are pretty random and people find it hard to write. After I send prompts I keep thinking like "that's an amazing prompt but would they know what to write?? what if they don't know the movie/book/anime????"
Anyway, would you be my senpai?
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