I'M A KAISOO HOE
anonymous
December 21 2016, 18:02:08 UTC
Okay. This was a very touching story between a father and a daughter. Of course I expected angst since the theme focused predominantly on Kyungsoo's life as a single dad and as a victim of bullying. I'd be frank. I thought Chanyeol, Luhan, Baekhyun, and Jongdae were massive assholes that needed some serious lecturing. If I knew them personally, I'd never hesitate to punch them in the throat for Kyungsoo. To be fair, I'm a hundred percent Jongdae because of the pizza scene: “Dude, make it three! The third box is mine only.” Also, what the fuck, man, they are friendship goals for watching porn together, which reminds me of one particular moment in real life. Lmao. *side-eyes you* Anyway, Luhan cracked me up. I couldn't help but imagine him screaming "She's going to cum!" at Jongin.
Now let me discuss the characters. Oh, god, Eunmi was adorable. I totally understood why Kyungsoo cared about her. She was so precious, and I liked her being cutesy-whiny here. Then we have Kyungsoo. I admired him. At such a young age, he was able to carry a hefty amount of burden. He had a strong mind, and I could see through him. He was independent, patient, and mature. Albeit a bit emotional, he was immensely kindhearted, and I loved that about him the most. Finally, Jongin. At first, I couldn't appreciate him for harassing Kyungsoo. I wanted to rip his face off because really, if he really liked him, he wouldn't resort to that. Nonetheless, it was acceptable at some point. And when he said,"I don’t want Eunmi to lack love from a missing parent like how I felt for years," believe me, I blushed hard. Everything made sense to me in an instance. Like, dude, I have a weak heart for soft Jongin in fics. Also, when he was making different voices to dub the dolls, I smiled, like, no, don't do this to me, stop being such a darling!
For the record, this, this fucking moved me:
"Kyungsoo was just finally took a closer look on how noticeable her mom’s wrinkles were now. She was getting older and what he had been doing in his life? Wallow in the past? In his misery and pull his mom down with him? God, his mom’s days were dwindling and he never did anything good to her. Why was he just realizing how terrible a son he is? Everything was crushing down at him. All at once. He felt like he was already shouldering the universe."
I suddenly remembered my mom, and Jesus Christ, I swore I tried not to weep.
To wrap it up, this was enjoyable to read, and I'm glad I gave it a try even though I was never a fan of mpreg. Thank you for writing and sharing this beauty. I loved the ending, by the way. I thought it was the perfect closing line. ❤
P.S. This doesn't even need a revision or what. And I love you to bits!
Now let me discuss the characters. Oh, god, Eunmi was adorable. I totally understood why Kyungsoo cared about her. She was so precious, and I liked her being cutesy-whiny here. Then we have Kyungsoo. I admired him. At such a young age, he was able to carry a hefty amount of burden. He had a strong mind, and I could see through him. He was independent, patient, and mature. Albeit a bit emotional, he was immensely kindhearted, and I loved that about him the most. Finally, Jongin. At first, I couldn't appreciate him for harassing Kyungsoo. I wanted to rip his face off because really, if he really liked him, he wouldn't resort to that. Nonetheless, it was acceptable at some point. And when he said,"I don’t want Eunmi to lack love from a missing parent like how I felt for years," believe me, I blushed hard. Everything made sense to me in an instance. Like, dude, I have a weak heart for soft Jongin in fics. Also, when he was making different voices to dub the dolls, I smiled, like, no, don't do this to me, stop being such a darling!
For the record, this, this fucking moved me:
"Kyungsoo was just finally took a closer look on how noticeable her mom’s wrinkles were now. She was getting older and what he had been doing in his life? Wallow in the past? In his misery and pull his mom down with him? God, his mom’s days were dwindling and he never did anything good to her. Why was he just realizing how terrible a son he is? Everything was crushing down at him. All at once. He felt like he was already shouldering the universe."
I suddenly remembered my mom, and Jesus Christ, I swore I tried not to weep.
To wrap it up, this was enjoyable to read, and I'm glad I gave it a try even though I was never a fan of mpreg. Thank you for writing and sharing this beauty. I loved the ending, by the way. I thought it was the perfect closing line. ❤
P.S. This doesn't even need a revision or what. And I love you to bits!
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