[I58] YOU'RE A PERFECT 10

Aug 01, 2016 09:43





Prompt Code: I58
Title: you’re a perfect 10
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: flirt Kyungsoo; bullying
Word Count: 5,338
Summary: When a weirdo from his class pesters for his attention and hits on him, all Jongin wants is to get away.
AN: When I saw this prompt, I just had to write it.

Jongin stares at the colourful vandals scribbled on his concrete seat. )

category: i, round 1: 2016

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hojichadust August 1 2016, 03:15:01 UTC
Wow omg this was really cute and interesting!! The thing that I really enjoyed about this is that Jongin and Kyungsoo werent placed in the set role dynamics that they usually end up in--nowadays it feels like one of them is always very cookie-cutter shy while the other exudes perfect confidence and appeal, aka the "dom" of the relationship, but your characters really break those molds.

I like that Kyungsoo worked up the courage to pursue Jongin and seemed so positive and self-assured when he was asking him out, but also had his insecurities and was capable of blushing and crying. I like that Jongin was kind of sheepish and quiet and a self-proclaimed romanticist and unable to keep himself from falling for Kyungsoo's, but at the same time he looked out for Kyungsoo and didnt hesitate to punch the shit out of Jongdae for hurting them. They really just seemed like full, rounded characters with all kinds of different sides to them, and that makes me really appreciate this fic. It kept pushing my expectations of what they were going to do and the direction that the story was moving in.

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderfully refreshing fic!! Please continue with your wonderful work :)

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