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#87: Spring Calls

Dec 27, 2016 18:02

Title: Spring calls
Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Jongin
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5,3k
Summary: Mate season is here and hybrid bear Jongin is concerned by two things: his lovely neighbor and the pebbles in front his door.

( It’s the third time this week that Jongin finds a shiny pebble on his wood styled carpet in front of his apartment. )

round one, rating: pg13, pairing: jongin/d.o.

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thebakaberry December 28 2016, 07:48:08 UTC

You had me at the whole penguin hybrid Kyungsoo punching chanyeol in the stomach I live for this au. I'm honestly crying at the thought of Jongin coming over for some sugar that's so sweet and pure and I canNOT HANDLE THIS FLUFF(?) WITH EVERYONE TRYING TO COURT KYUNGSOO AND HIM SHUTTING EVERYONE BUT JONGIN DOWN AND THEN LEAVING JONGIN HINTS WITH THE PEBBLES I WAS SCREAMING AT JONGIN THE WHOLE FIC. On a side note the little factoid about the gentoo penguin is just adorable like my mental images of Kyungsoo searching around the neighborhood for the shiniest stone to gift Jongin is the best I'm sobbing anD THEN WHEN JONGIN CATCHES KYUNGSOO IN THE ACT I HONESTLY HAVE NO WORDS IM JUST SCREAMING I love how you just switched the dynamic right there with Kyungsoo getting flustered and then Jongin's blunder and then his confession

"Keep wooing me, please?" i can't i just 👌🏻👌🏻👌🏻😩🙌🏻😩😩😩😩🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻💯💯💯💯

On another note I am also in love with your Yixing character. He literally said one line but the one line is perfect thank you

It took me so long to read this and it's not because I'm a slow reader but I had to stop like every three seconds, scream, punch a pillow before I could continue on. This was honestly the best thing ever I never wanted this to end and ngl I'm gonna run through this like three more times after I leave this comment. Sorry it's so incoherent btw I started writing it while I read through this so most of it was just me screaming but screaming because of you and your great writing. Thank you thank you thank you for gifting the world with this masterpiece of a fic I will literally follow you to the ends of this earth

dokyan January 15 2017, 02:13:50 UTC

I thought Chanyeol and Jongdae would be lovely choices for those times. I can't stop thinking about Kyungsoo wandering looking for a pebble either, he. Oh my god, I love Yixing too, I wish I had used more dialogues for him, another time will be!
thank you darling <3

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