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#87: Spring Calls

Dec 27, 2016 18:02

Title: Spring calls
Pairing(s): Kyungsoo/Jongin
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5,3k
Summary: Mate season is here and hybrid bear Jongin is concerned by two things: his lovely neighbor and the pebbles in front his door.

( It’s the third time this week that Jongin finds a shiny pebble on his wood styled carpet in front of his apartment. )

round one, rating: pg13, pairing: jongin/d.o.

Comments 63

actualbaekhyun December 28 2016, 01:09:16 UTC

THIS WAS SO CUTE OMG i really like kyungsoo's characterization here bc it seemed so much like the real him! doing such a cute thing for jongin and being so kind to him while being grouchy with everyone else :') and the pebbles!!! i loved this fic so much i'll probably come back and reread it ;; <3

dokyan January 15 2017, 02:07:58 UTC

ah~ that's so nice to hear, I wanted to do exactly that
thanks love <3

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dokyan January 15 2017, 02:08:23 UTC

thank you for reading and commenting!!! <3

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dokyan January 15 2017, 02:09:54 UTC

aye, you are the one being cute, thank you <3
that was one of my favorite scenes tbh and yes, they totally should

88x12 December 28 2016, 04:25:51 UTC

THIS IS SO CUTE IT GIVES ME PALPITATIONS PLEASE TAKE RESPONSIBILITY
i absolutely adore the characterisations :'))) i love this a lot!! thank you so much for your words. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

dokyan January 15 2017, 02:10:15 UTC

I will take responsibility, don't worry
thank you !!!

thebakaberry December 28 2016, 07:48:08 UTC

You had me at the whole penguin hybrid Kyungsoo punching chanyeol in the stomach I live for this au. I'm honestly crying at the thought of Jongin coming over for some sugar that's so sweet and pure and I canNOT HANDLE THIS FLUFF(?) WITH EVERYONE TRYING TO COURT KYUNGSOO AND HIM SHUTTING EVERYONE BUT JONGIN DOWN AND THEN LEAVING JONGIN HINTS WITH THE PEBBLES I WAS SCREAMING AT JONGIN THE WHOLE FIC. On a side note the little factoid about the gentoo penguin is just adorable like my mental images of Kyungsoo searching around the neighborhood for the shiniest stone to gift Jongin is the best I'm sobbing anD THEN WHEN JONGIN CATCHES KYUNGSOO IN THE ACT I HONESTLY HAVE NO WORDS IM JUST SCREAMING I love how you just switched the dynamic right there with Kyungsoo getting flustered and then Jongin's blunder and then his confession

"Keep wooing me, please?" i can't i just ( ... )

dokyan January 15 2017, 02:13:50 UTC

I thought Chanyeol and Jongdae would be lovely choices for those times. I can't stop thinking about Kyungsoo wandering looking for a pebble either, he. Oh my god, I love Yixing too, I wish I had used more dialogues for him, another time will be!
thank you darling <3