#49: Three Is a Charm, Two Is Not the Same

Jan 06, 2017 17:47

Title: Three Is a Charm, Two Is Not the Same
Pairing(s): Chanyeol/Kyungsoo, Chanyeol/Jongin/Kyungsoo
Rating: R/NC-17
Length: ~18K
Warning(s): [Please click here to open.]Polyamory
Summary: Jongin and Kyungsoo are best friends. Kyungsoo starts dating Chanyeol. Chanyeol thinks they can do better.
Author's Note: Thanks mods for bearing with me through my objectively terrible ( Read more... )

round one, pairing: jongin/chanyeol/d.o., rating: nc17

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dreaminglasts January 7 2017, 03:57:12 UTC
I feel so gidy. I can't believe I just read this whole fic. I can't believe this fic exists. This is the first chakaisoo fic I have read while being in this fandom and I am glad that this fic was the first one I read. Gosh, I wish it could have been longer and I wonder what corners you cut to get this done. I also wonder if you'll ever want to continue this verse. I would really want to read more from you from this verse.

That said, I should also share that this is the first time that I have read Chansoo. I've never had a notp but I guess with the feelings and thoughts I've had of Chansoo as a ship they come close to being a notp for me. Mainly because I ship both of them with Jongin specifically. The only reason I am sharing this is to comment on the fact that I really enjoyed the Chansoo I got to read in this fic. When we get to know who you are lovely writer, I think if you have written more of Chansoo I would love to read what you have written. I have never stopped to think of Chansoo's dynamic in real life but I think if I had to think about it all that I see their dynamic as you wrote it. I really enjoyed the comfort that Chanyeol gave Kyungsoo--I found it beautiful that you are able to write a loud, confident Chanyeol who is aware and cares of others--this trait is one of the things that I loved and it drives me up the wall when Chanyeol is written as inattentive or uncaring. I really love the softness of Chanyeol that you wrote. Also, how you pointed out that he is so good looking that it hurts. I feel you Jongin, I too get angry sometimes by how good he looks. It's painful.

Ahhh I loved every moment of this. I would quote the whole thing to show you how much I enjoyed everything. The moment that made my breath catch was the first kiss between ChanKai. I think I loved it the best because it was the first time in the fic that we got to see Chankaisoo. I wish we could have gotten more of these scenes since the fic was about Chankaisoo. I don't mean to sound demanding--I guess what I am trying to say is that you build up to this moment so well that I wanted to see more since you, in my opinion, built fully and believably, the attraction between the three of them. I was so afraid that I wouldn't end up believing the ships. That's why I wanted to see more because your writing had me deeply invested in their story.

Again I look forward to finding out who you are so I can follow you writing and tell you how much I appreciate every word. Thank you, thank you for everything lovely writer.

P.S.
Gosh I am also invested in BaekXing. That brief comment about Baekhyun spilling creamer (I think that is what it was) and Yixing finding it cute had me in giggles. I loved how much cute we got about them in just a little space. :)

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fadetomorrow January 22 2017, 03:24:23 UTC
omgosh this wonderful long comment!! i am undeserving

this fic is actually only the second time i've written chansoo and i don't read them a lot either. but i'm so happy you liked how they were portrayed.

and i dunno if i would ever write more of this -- maybe?? haha i'm not terribly against the idea. even though it's my own fic i also agree that it could've used more chankaisoo moments so who knows maybe i'll be inspired add to this verse.

so happy you liked the baekxing moment!!! i don't really have a true otp in exo but baekxing is pretty close. i will sneak them into everything.

ty again dear reader! ♥

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