[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [6/?]
Chapter 6
"In the End, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends."
- Martin Luther King Jr. (1929-1968)
A block away from Club Shion on their way to the parking lot where Yunho had parked his black BMW, it occurred to him that the footsteps echoing from perhaps half a block away were ( Read more... )
I really love how much work and research you put into this story!! The mystery, action, and romance all balance out so wonderfully! I'm so glad to see that Yoochun and Junsu are getting drawn closer and closer together, but it seems that they will have an obstacle preventing them from meeting easily: a very angry Yunho!!! D8 I hope he doesn't hurt poor Chunnie!! I understand that he is a very private person, but I think he should be able to share his Junsu with Yoochun! Or is there something deeper??
The Jaejoong case is definitively getting more complex! I can read (basic) Japanese, so I can understand what the 4 young people were doing, but how did they get such information?? How can they think it was Jaejoong? And the Club? What is its role in the development of the story?? Changmin and Junsu are somehow involved in all of this, right?? These questions that you placed throughout the story really carry the plot, and effectively captures the reader, in my opinion. Great Job!!! You're dropping some hints here and there, but I really can't formulate any concrete theories!! XD
Too bad the Jaeho doesn't seem to be getting any closer together though; if anything Jaejoong is probably pissed off at Yunho for having endangered him by staying to confront those people instead of running away. And he's probably miffed at all the doubt Yunho throws at him. Tough love is good though! XD
I'm thoroughly looking forward to the next chapter~! Good luck!
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