[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [4/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 4

If only there were evil people somewhere insidiously committing evil deeds, and it were necessary only to separate them from the rest of us and destroy them. But the line dividing good and evil cuts through the heart of every human being, and who is willing to destroy his own heart?
            - Alexander Solzhensitsvn

Comments

[kai_yukashi]

unfortunately I don't have a beta. x___x Yeah I'm pretty much aware of my problems with tenses. What i've been doing, since I don't have a beta, is reread it over and over again to catch the most obvious tense problems. The ones that are left are basically the ones that 1) didn't catch or 2) wasn't sure if I was SUPPOSED to have it in a certain tense. Not being a native Eng speaker (although i've been in US for over 10 years now actually...) means I never started really with the basics, so I'm really rocky on it. x__x If you see some of the really obvious ones, feel free to point it out and I'll fix it in my final version. I plan to finish writing this (possibly) unbetaed, and then at the very end I'm going to have it betaed, proofed, get the plot straightened even more, and then release a completed pdf version, just for the hell of it. lol But that's still somewhat far down...we haven't even gotten to the Jaeho yet. *cries*

thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like it so far. I'm actually just a little frustrated with my inability to GET ANYWHERE on the bloody story. I feel like I'm writing a bunch of filler stuff that have nothing to do with the plot, almost, except it does have stuff to do with the plot... *sigh* Well we'll see. Thanks for commenting, and YOU write more too so I can read. XD