I really like it. I've read some of your other stuff on FF.net....okay, i've read everything on ff.net...=_0=
I think that the characterization is a bit off, and that it tends to be overdramatic here or there, but I like the setting, and I'm a sucker for Desmond getting his ass beat. What can I say, the boy's just not that bright, he was bound to get a pop to the face one of these days for being careless with his words.
I'm really curios to see how you follow up on this[please do], because I'm completely unsure of how Lucy would react. She's been assured of her status, albeit unintentionally, in this story, and I'm apt to think she wouldn't take,'I only like you as a friend, and I'm gayer than a barrel of skittles for the guy in the corner who treats me like crap' very well.
Is it? Where did I seem to mess up their characters? Just so I can make sure I don't make any mistakes in the near future... And yes, over dramatic is my middle name! That was kind of the whole point of the story; angst and drama, huzzah! And yes, he definately had it coming to him ~
Oh no, no, I'm not continuing this. I'd butcher it if I did so - I think I just needed to lash out and do a very heavy one shot. Though, thanks for the encouragement!
Pretty much just the whole running out in the rain over a hapless statement. The statement should be understandable, after all, Lucy did kind of save him, and was his only friend during captivity.
BUt then again, this is a fanfiction, so ya pretty much have to make some stuff up to make two normally straight guys shack up. :"3
...not that we really have any idea what Shaun is..... maybe in AC3?
Well I love it. The agnstness and the face smashing are two things I'm HUGE on. <3
Oh I completely understand, I'm the same way. I start something and I get it just how I like it, and if I touch it. It'll be destroyed. 8
Heeey, yeah, my friend said that too. Oh well, I needed him to freak out over something, right?
Haha,you got tht true. Do you have a ff.net account? (:
Hopefully! It'll probably be set in modern day, so you never know, but let's keep our fingers crossed! I'd like to know more about Rebecca too, there was hardly a word about her.
Eehee, thanks ~ That means a lot!
Ahaha, exactly. I just... like where I left it. Leaves you to think up the ending.
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I think that the characterization is a bit off, and that it tends to be overdramatic here or there, but I like the setting, and I'm a sucker for Desmond getting his ass beat. What can I say, the boy's just not that bright, he was bound to get a pop to the face one of these days for being careless with his words.
I'm really curios to see how you follow up on this[please do], because I'm completely unsure of how Lucy would react. She's been assured of her status, albeit unintentionally, in this story, and I'm apt to think she wouldn't take,'I only like you as a friend, and I'm gayer than a barrel of skittles for the guy in the corner who treats me like crap' very well.
But yesm, I liked it very much. :>
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Is it? Where did I seem to mess up their characters? Just so I can make sure I don't make any mistakes in the near future... And yes, over dramatic is my middle name! That was kind of the whole point of the story; angst and drama, huzzah! And yes, he definately had it coming to him ~
Oh no, no, I'm not continuing this. I'd butcher it if I did so - I think I just needed to lash out and do a very heavy one shot. Though, thanks for the encouragement!
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BUt then again, this is a fanfiction, so ya pretty much have to make some stuff up to make two normally straight guys shack up. :"3
...not that we really have any idea what Shaun is..... maybe in AC3?
Well I love it. The agnstness and the face smashing are two things I'm HUGE on. <3
Oh I completely understand, I'm the same way. I start something and I get it just how I like it, and if I touch it. It'll be destroyed. 8
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Haha,you got tht true. Do you have a ff.net account? (:
Hopefully! It'll probably be set in modern day, so you never know, but let's keep our fingers crossed! I'd like to know more about Rebecca too, there was hardly a word about her.
Eehee, thanks ~ That means a lot!
Ahaha, exactly. I just... like where I left it. Leaves you to think up the ending.
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