rinse and repeat

Aug 11, 2016 16:22

s.coups/nayeon
3199w, g

nayeon accidentally floods the laundry room. seungcheol really needs to do laundry.

what reminds you of home? )

#oneshot, ♡ s.coups/nayeon, *twice, *seventeen

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kisoap August 27 2016, 02:43:35 UTC
i am back, 16 days later, and in those 16 days i have prepared myself to write this very long, following comment.

FIRST OF ALL: you spoil me so much yun like. i wasn't even over the feelings the day6/got7 haikyuu!! fic gave me and then you flood me with more feels (a lot like shida's gif below lol)? i'm drowning under the soapy laundry water? when i saw this was the prompt you wrote to, i literally lied down on the floor and told myself i don't deserve this bc you're too good for me!!!

SECOND OF ALL: the whole fic. from the way it started out, i already knew this was going to become one of my favorites because i could completely relate to stubbornly trying to do things by yourself to prove you're "grown up." and then failing colossally. so i totally felt nayeon on a spiritual level.
i laughed when seungcheol grabbed her bra out of the washing machine lolol - out of all her clothes, it had to be that! and i love nayeon silently judging seungcheol's laundry skills! idk everything about their first encounter was so cute like them ))):

Not in the fleeting, I’m-having-so-much-fun sort of way, but rather in a drowsy, boredom tinged amble - sort of like when a train begins to slow to a stop in the middle of nowhere because the train before has been held up.
this is exactly how i spend my summer haha! also this sentence, and all your sentences really, are so pretty and vivid and tangible that they kinda make me wonder why i even try writing!

i really love all your imagery - of nayeon's memories, of the tastes and feelings and sensations when they go to the beach - and the childish/happy relationship of seungcheol and nayeon. how seungcheol tries to keep her as a summer memory but how nayeon has none of that. how they end up falling back together. idk there's really nothing i have to fault about this fic, it's the perfect fic imo? i don't know if i'm doing a good job articulating that i love it so much and just want to read it over and over!

AND THE ENDING. i think it's my favorite part - just the most satisfying end to such a beautiful fic that i'm not worthy of deserving ;; i actually clawed at my face because i didn't want it to be over but then THAT ENDING so i accepted fate ;;;;;; i'm really not doing it justice in this comment but i read that last line over and over again and fell in love even more each time!

i was going to quote a bunch of lines but i realized i was highlighting most of the fic so i'll refrain haha! but thank you so much again yun, this is literally everything ;;;;; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kagamiwa August 27 2016, 14:03:22 UTC
sapphy you spoil me with your comments omg i'd write you a book if it meant getting beautiful comments all the time i love your essays so much
your sungjin dp is really the best tho it is my face every time i read your comments ;__;

saldjlaskdlaas but you are so welcome you deserve all the fics bb and if it wasn't for your prompt this wouldn't exist and pls you are an amazing writer, you totally inspire me to get better every time i read your work ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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kisoap August 28 2016, 22:01:32 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
my sungjin dp is me every time i read your fics ;;;;

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