If this is just the prologue, I don't know if I can handle everything else? ;w;
Firstly, I really, really love your writing style. I feel like I was reading a Murakami's piece of work, with the whole dark and deep setting & the way you've described it. And it's brilliant. The part where Jackson said "I'm at home" but then "Or I will be soon" really hit me hard and I actually got shivers. I re-read that part for a few times tbh. But of course your last few lines stole the moment - "Jackson never picked up" "Jackson was always the first to jump."
wow seriously you are so good at writing, yun. and also you and shida are so good at plotting our demise... you're just gonna kill us all, y'know. too beautiful for words. i miss me some good ol' angst but this is a fresh take on it - your writing style ;_; i can't. so excited gah
WOAH OKAY this is really good and the ending really caught me off guard man ;____; stumbled across this because I think someone retweeted this fic aha but man, this is really good and now I can't wait to read more of this x__x jackson though DDD:
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Firstly, I really, really love your writing style. I feel like I was reading a Murakami's piece of work, with the whole dark and deep setting & the way you've described it. And it's brilliant. The part where Jackson said "I'm at home" but then "Or I will be soon" really hit me hard and I actually got shivers. I re-read that part for a few times tbh. But of course your last few lines stole the moment - "Jackson never picked up" "Jackson was always the first to jump."
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I CAN'T TAKE THIS
JACKSON
NUUUUU
wow seriously you are so good at writing, yun. and also you and shida are so good at plotting our demise... you're just gonna kill us all, y'know. too beautiful for words. i miss me some good ol' angst but this is a fresh take on it - your writing style ;_; i can't. so excited gah
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stumbled across this because I think someone retweeted this fic aha but man, this is really good and now I can't wait to read more of this x__x
jackson though DDD:
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