Taste Of You Part One
Okay...So I promised Connie a while ago some vampire smut in a forest. Weeeeeeeeeeell...I kinda forgot until just recently. And by then I was swamped with work here at college. So now I have some free time soI decided I would write her her porn. Connie loves her porn you know! XDDDD I love you big sis! Here is the angsty part 1! Any mistakes will ( Read more... )
Hum, that definitely sounds interesting :D And I know all about the plot changing on you =___= I can't count how often that happened to me already and is... very likely to happen again *sighs* ('Lovely Rebel' is my actual prime example right now XD It started out as a simple Ed/Greed one-shot with some sex and turned into a multi-parter monster including lots of plot and a Ed/Roy/Greed threesome now. How is that for a change? XD And it's not even done yet... *is afraid of what might come yet*)
As for the smooth-writing... your sentences flow very neatly into another, that makes the reading easier ^___^ Maybe a few more paragraphs wouldn't hurt to make it easier on the eyes, but then again, I'm a paragraph whore XD
(and I have no clue what my style is either XD And even if my old ff's prolly suck major (hey, I wrote my first english ff as I was only daring to write in english at all for about three months... XD) I'm waaaay too lazy for a do-over >.>)
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XDDDD It's not my best writing since I changed my style but it's good enough. XD Vampire Love is the one attatched to this. And I have some more deleted scenes here on LJ.
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