I CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW, PART 5 / 12

[kachelofen]

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[love4movies]

Love, love, love it. My favorite chapter so far. :)

[kachelofen]

Thank you. I thought you might like this one. :-)

[duffy_60]

Even though I love Justin with Brian so much, I am really liking Jon, too! :-)
I feel the angst level climbing. I wonder how Lindsay is going to spin Brian wanting to sign away all of his rights to Mel, and guilt him all the while.

See ya Friday, sweetie!

[kachelofen]

Jon is like a breath of cool air, isn't he? No drama involved at all. :-)

Thanks, Daphne

[koalared]

So the turkey baster makes an appearance after all? hehe
There is so much more to say. Great chapter. I was giddy
when Justin and Jon fucked. But I hope it doesn't ruin
their friendship. Justin does need more friends.
Brian really is a piece of work. Ultimately I always
want Justin and Brian together but you've written Justin
tiring of the situation so well. In real life would someone
actually but up with that? Looking forward to Friday!

[kachelofen]

I doubt that anybody would put up with Brian in real life. I certainly wouldn't. But I love him anyway. Not much different from Justin then. Lol.

Thank you.

[pet0511]

Fuck.
It works me up, this story. You know, you're waiting for a new part and then you read it and it leaves you in a bad mood. You could strangle all characters involved, and you ...oh, I have no idea what I could do with Brian and Justin right now. Good thing I have two days now to calm down.
Jeez, your writing makes me feel in all directions. And now I'm really curious about the next happenings. I still don't trust Lindsay. I know condoms aren't completely safe but still... And I can understand Justin's "jealousy" but jeezfuckinghell, what about a good nice hard queenout for once? A real one!?
Thanks for sharing!!!
Pet

[kachelofen]

Lol. Strangle away. I really love how worked up you get. Hopefully by tomorrow, you'll have calmed down enough so that you can take the next chapter. *g*

I agree, that Justin would probably benefit from ranting and raving, rather than trying to work it out quietly. And maybe Brian would get a clue then, too.

Thank you.

[kachelofen]

Justin certainly could do with getting away from all the pressure of the family every once in a while. Although in this one, they are not all Brian's friends first and foremost.

Thank you.