Fic: The Middle Man, R/S, NC17

[kabeyk]

Title: The Middle Man
Pairings: R/S, (R/OFC, S/OFC)
Rating: NC17, definitely. Read at your own risk.

Summary: One day, Sirius notices how attractive Remus’ girlfriend is.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Warnings: Okay. Well, this needs a major het warning for all those slashers that don’t like. Yet, despite the large amount of (not too graphic in most

Comments

[coconutswirl]

That is the hottest thing I have ever read. *blushing hard* .. oh god, it is good. Oh dear lord, it is good.

[kabeyk]

Really? Oh my god, thank you! This was just so filthy it scared me! It wasn't supposed to be like this! Really? Thank you.xx

kxx

[coconutswirl]

I'm caught between blushing hard and squeeing because that fic hits every single goddamn button I have. The friendship, the electrical currents, the dirtiness of their deeds - poor girl but she wasn't exactly innocent - the small touches, cigarette sharing and .. can I just say how much I love the idea of the shared beds and the cupboard and the sneaking around and .. how Sirius avoids saying "dog".

Seriously. Seriously the hottest fic I've read in .. forever. I whimpered five times.

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you.x Heh. I still can't believe I wrote something this dirty. Thank you.

kxx

[roz_morgan]

Holy yes! That ending - that was just the best thing ever; so very hot.

Zanna I did not like because she cheated on Remus, and really that poor boy has enough problems anyway with out a slutty girlfriend. I loved how Sirius slowly worked it all out that what he wanted was Remus; and that Remus wanted to be the one who was fucked - I don't know why but Remus on the bottom is such a kink of mine.

[kabeyk]

Heh, I always get complaints because I usually write Remus bottoming, so thank you! Thank you!

kxx

[roz_morgan]

Heh. I have such problems seeing Sirius willingly bottoming; he'd have to bottom from the top - riding Remus, before I'd agree to seeing him willingly doing it.

[kabeyk]

Heh, don't give me ideas...

kxx

[minnow_53]

First comment?

I loved this! It didn't seem particularly perverted, and it is good to see het sex done well too. Realistically, at any rate.

‘We don’t need her, we could just have each other and do that, and do it properly, oh yes.

I loved the moment of revelation, and found the whole thing extremely erotic.

So there! Well worth the wait.

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Thanks! It still was perverted though. Argh.

Oh, yes, glad I finally finished it!

There should have been more to the het, really, but I wimped out, heh.

Thank you.x

kxx

[minnow_53]

I don't know. It was believable. I didn't say 'Ugh, how could anyone do this?' because I could imagine them doing it. So from that angle no, it wasn't perverted. Oh, well, in the abstract, I suppose. And to enter the top/bottom debate, I always see Remus bottoming too, though I do like to think they take it in turns. But that probably IS unrealistic. Maybe why I like your fics, apart from them being so good and readable and hot, that is! With plots. Great plots.

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Aww, thanks. So late, must run.xx

kxx

[foulbeggar]

Egads.

It wasn't as perverted as you made it out to be, though. But perhaps I've just become desensitised and if that is the case then that is really sad because I really shouldn't be.

I loved all the subtle little Sirius-wanting-Remus things, and Sirius really is a rather sick freak, isn't he?

I would pick out specific lines, but I'm still a bit incoherent and I don't know what to say.

The 'journey' (sorry for using that wanky term) of Sirius slowly thinking more about Remus than Zanna and doing things just to imagine Remus' reaction was just so splendid because it was gradual and believable in its progression.

I think that's where the coherency runs out and I bestow upon you the Order of the HUZZAH and we dance around the palace while the Queen chats to Stephen Fry (that refers to an odd 'conversation' with minnow_53 - plain old odd - but you are now a member of the order).

[kabeyk]

Yes, yes, it's Sirius that's the perverted freak, not me.

Sorry, have to leave for work now or I'll be soooo late.

Thank you!

kxx

[kabeyk]

I thought people would be a little disturbed by this; I was disturbed that I had the idea in the first place!

Don't worry about the wankt term, thanks for saying it! I wasn't sure I'd got that right.

And, m'dear, it is an honour. *bows, because I'm so not a girl*

kxx

[kabeyk]

Wow, that was like nothing I've ever read before!

Well it was like nothing I've ever written before, and in a rather scary and disturbing way, but thank you!

kxx