Fic: What's Mine is Yours (R/J, NC-17)

[kabeyk]

This fic has twisted and distorted horribly from it’s humble beginnings as a PWP. I’m very sorry. Many, many thanks to minnow_53 and liadlaith for the read-through. And, just, sorry again.

Title: What’s Mine is Yours
Pairing: Remus/James, Remus/Sirius, James/Lily
Word count: 3861
Rating: NC-17

Summary: There are some things in life that you never expect.

Comments

[minnow_53]

Check inbox quickly, last message, one tiny.

Oh, look, first comment! How surprising.

I love this. To me, it's a really original take on James. I love your heady mix of sex, jealously, friendship, and James's intense relationship with Remus contrasted with his almost detached relationship with Lily. I love the porn, and I love the final section and the unbearably poignant last line, which puts me in mind of 'Every man kills the thing he loves'. I think that's Wilde, and I think it's a misquote, but you get the idea.

Really great, anyway. And hey, I don't even LIKE J/R. I forgot that altogether! So, doubly well done. ♥

^_^xx

[kabeyk]

Soz, was already in the pub. Sorry for running out on you (and my poor, terrible fic) like that, but there were people yelling at me. I'll go sort that errant 'J' right now.

You still up? I'm watching the election right now. God, Boris Johnson is an arse, heh.

I still hate it, save the porn.

But thank you, and much love.xx

kxx

[minnow_53]

I couldn't stay awake, and it was very boring, so I went to bed at about two. How did you do? Our MP is the Labour one who conceded defeat then found he'd won after all. Put Medway on the map... Told you Lib Dems were nowhere round here. But at least Blair hates him and he hates Blair.

^_^x

[kabeyk]

Yeah, I gave in about 2am too. Heh, really? Oh dear. Was he the bloke ranting on about Blair hating his guts?

All constituencies around here have been held by Labour, including this one by a majority of 4000 or so, so nothing to worry about.

Ugh, they're doing that thing with Downing Street and the disturbing Sim party leaders.

kxx

[roz_morgan]

Break my heart why don't you?

*goes off to cry* that was so sad and I felt so sorry for James and I don't even like the pairing! I also felt sorry for Lily, she deserves someone better than James - still hung up on Remus and Sirius.

[kabeyk]

Sorry. If it helps, I really hated writing it!

kxx

[wildestranger]

What is it about the general that make speople want to write porn? It can't be Tony Blair, cause, really, Blair-porn is just not on.

Leaving that topic far behind, that was incredibly sexy and sweet and confirms absolutely what I thought about Remus and James. While Remus/Sirius is the OTP, James is sensible (and as such, would surely fancy Remus) which Sirius, whatever else he might be, is not. That was very hot and intense and did I ever tell you how much I love the way you tell a story? That was just wonderful.

[kabeyk]

Thank you! That was really sweet.x

Ughh, Blair-porn. Mmm, Swingometer.

kxx

[ramen_addict]

Wah. It always comes back to betrayal, doesn't it? I'm not big on James/Remus, but oh, the poor deer dear.

[kabeyk]

Heh. I bloody hate this fic. Soz, but I can't stop whinging about it.

Oh deery me.

kxx

[ramen_addict]

I think just about all my stuff is crap, so I can't blame you for feeling that way. We're our own worst critics and all that.

My hart bleeds for you.

[kabeyk]

Yeah, s'pose. God, I hate this fic.

Hee, that's good. I can't think of an amusing pun on antlers.

kxx

[kabeyk]

Thank you! Aww, I madly in love with James, and I hated to do that to him.

kxx