I wrote more R/S porn

[kabeyk]

Okay, this was supposed to be short and cute, and therefore, of course, is neither.

Title: Funny Thing
Author: kabeyk
Rating: Hard R/NC17
Word count: 6000+

Summary: Remus has hated being touched for as long as Sirius has known him. So what changed?
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Warnings: Slight dominant/submissive, and freckles

Comments

[beckaandzac]

I'd second this quibble, but yeah, this is absolutely lovely. You and Sirius obviously have kind of a thing for Remus's skin: scars in The Unconventional Way, freckles here. Of course, I can imagine Remus having really nice skin...

And this in particular made me laugh:
James may have slightly more defined arm muscles -only due to his intensive masturbatory habits, Sirius liked to point out

-Becka

[minnow_53]

Hi! I deleted the post, cos I didn't know K. had crossposted when I wrote it!. Felt awful, so glad you agree. And it is a lovely fic, isn't it?

[kabeyk]

Now I wanna know. What did I do?

kx

[pica_scribit]

*melt* ooh! tasty puppies!

[kabeyk]

Yum.

Actually I'm a vegetarian.

kxx

[foulbeggar]

Huzzah for freckled Remus!
Very lovely.
I really liked dominant-rather irrationally angry (in a kinky way) Sirius and his slowly teaching/allowing Remus to touch him more.

But Remus was vaguely attractive in an unusual sort of way, if you liked boys who were pale and delicate, with long pale limbs, thin pale-brown hair and matching eyes
Who doesn't like boys like that? Best-boy-ever! Especially if they have that cute ruddy cheeks thing.

Oh, and Sirius' fascination with when and whether Remus was getting hard...made me smile indulgently to myself. Oh, silly little Sirius; so in denial.

And it really isn't fair that you write such damn tantalising and involving stories because I should most definitely be doing my Creative piece for Lit and you are distracting and it is not good. Curse you and your ability! Not good for those of us who have work to do!
*shakes fist half-heartedly*

:)

[foulbeggar]

I have finally finished the Creative Essay which you rudely impeded me from doing. *tut!tut!*

[kabeyk]

Well done. Sorry.

Who doesn't like boys like that?

And here I was thinking it was just me.

Thanks.x

kx

[myselftheliar]

that was fantastic. definitely one of my fave stories now. so wonderfully...crafted. I love insecure!remus and your Sirius is so..... sirius.... i am incoherant with delight

[kabeyk]

I liked Sirius like this; arrogant but still sweet. Thank you.

kx

[roz_morgan]

I'm only capable of one coherent thought at the moment and that is 'oh god this was hot' - just guh!

I wish I could give you a more through review because this was brilliantly written, was such an interesting take on both Remus and Sirius and how a relationship could have started and was just simply brilliant - freckles have suddenly become hugely sexy in my book.

[kabeyk]

Ohh, I've always had a thing for freckles! My first ever boyfriend had freckles; we were six, and I thought he was icky...

Anyway. Thank you!

kx