Too Good TEASER chapter: Version 2.0
READ OTHER POST FIRST or this totally won't make sense. Hokay, so I decided to post an alternative version I posted earlier because I just love it to death as well. I saw a fanart posted on the LJ KakaIru comm (it's also on DA, here is the link about sexy clones and I just had to put this up. It picks up after Genma's phone call and Iruka's escape. Tell me which version you like better please. I really like them both, and I hope you do too!
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Intro is the same, picks up here:
Outside the room
Genma was beginning to freak out. He knew he could undo the last seal, he just couldn’t seem to keep his blood flowing to the head between his shoulders. Dammit, there was no more concentrating on this, he’d just have to find another way in. Ahah! The window! He could try his luck there. Dragging a very confused Raidou with him, he leapt out the window at the end of the hallway and made his way hopping from window ledge to window ledge until he was outside the correct pane of glass.
Meanwhile…
Oblivious to the scheming going on above him, Kakashi strolled back to the Hokage Tower toting the dinner he’d bought. He decided he’d better not let anyone see him; the Godaime wouldn’t be pleased if she thought he was slacking off with such a serious situation at hand. Thinking this made Kakashi realize that, although he had appropriately secured the door to the room, he’d completely forgotten about the window! He broke into a sprint, running toward his helplessly bound chuunin. What if that little bitch Genma had been loitering around the room, waiting for Kakashi to come out and had now broken in! He wouldn’t put it past that horny bastard. Shit! He thought he’d felt someone’s chakra presence in the hallway as he’d left! Nearing his destination, Kakashi was horrified to see two figures stealthily making their way around the building to the window behind which his chuunin was lying. Gathering chakra into his legs, he sprang into the air and cemented his feet to the building beneath the two men. Peeling the two jounin from the wall, he flung them unceremoniously to the ground below.
Raidou looked around in surprise; one moment he had been dragged by Genma out the window and now he was flat on his back in the dirt. Genma was glaring daggers at somebody above them; Kakashi. The Copy-nin pointed a single finger at his exposed eye then aimed it to point at both of them. There was no question as to what that meant: ‘I’ll be watching you.’(1) Kakashi slipped effortlessly through the window and slapped a load of wards on it before tightly drawing the curtains. Sighing in defeat, Genma snatched at Raidou’s hand and dragged him off in the direction of his apartment to take out his sexual frustration.
Inside
As Kakashi spun around from drawing the curtains closed he realized two things: first, Iruka was no longer in the chakra cuffs, and second, the sexy chuunin was laid out on the bed flawlessly clean and smelling of scented soap while the cloying aroma of sex emanated from the dirty sheets flung into the corner. A feeling of dread arose in the pit of his stomach as surely as a trickle of blood began to flow from his nose; he was now in dangerous territory, for even with the wards and seals keeping people both from entering as well as leaving, Iruka could be wily and tricky and could most likely escape the premises. It apparently didn’t occur to the genius jounin that Iruka now had everything he wanted in the room with him and had no intention of leaving anytime soon, at least until he had sated his sexual appetite with his lover’s body. The next thing Kakashi knew, a head slowly poked up from the other side of the bed, revealing another equally sexy equally naked, equally alluring chuunin sensei. Kakashi gasped at the appearance of Iruka’s clone, his mask now dripping crimson drops to stain the carpet. The other Iruka crawled sensuously across the bed to sit beside Iruka, sliding his hands across the taut abdominals of his maker. Kakashi whimpered as a third Iruka emerged, leaning over the shoulder of the first clone and tilting his head down with a feisty glint in his eye. The last thing he saw before he collapsed into a faint from blood loss was a very deep, very wet kiss between the clones.
When he came to, Kakashi found himself nude on the bed, both his wrists and his ankles now trapped in chakra cuffs. The two clones were gone, but the real Iruka was seated with a leg tucked under him lightly stroking Kakashi’s chest as he looked with hunger at his now captive jounin. Iruka dragged his eyes up and down the length of Kakashi’s body with a look similar to one his nin-dogs would use when gazing at a juicy piece of meat. A shiver ran through Kakashi’s body as he took in the predatory way Iruka looked at him. Oh sensei! Kakashi felt his skin begin to heat up under Iruka’s scrutiny. He felt a thrill of excitement zinging through his body as he fully realized what the look in Iruka’s eyes could only mean. Not that the bondage wasn’t making things quite clear. Iruka’s lips curved into a pout, eyes narrowing as he slunk across the bed. He seated himself Kakashi’s hips in one smooth movement.
“You left me all alone,” he said huskily.
“I’m sorry,” Kakashi replied, wondering if he was about to be punished. Ohhhh sensei!
“How about you show me how sorry you are,” Iruka leered, moving up Kakashi’s body to expose his very prominent hard-on. “With your mouth, on my cock,” he finished.
TBC
(1) Comes from the movie Meet the Parents
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"Teaser" Version 1.0
Ch 5
Ch 4
"fluffy interlude"
Ch 3
Ch 2
Ch 1
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Intro is the same, picks up here:
Outside the room
Genma was beginning to freak out. He knew he could undo the last seal, he just couldn’t seem to keep his blood flowing to the head between his shoulders. Dammit, there was no more concentrating on this, he’d just have to find another way in. Ahah! The window! He could try his luck there. Dragging a very confused Raidou with him, he leapt out the window at the end of the hallway and made his way hopping from window ledge to window ledge until he was outside the correct pane of glass.
Meanwhile…
Oblivious to the scheming going on above him, Kakashi strolled back to the Hokage Tower toting the dinner he’d bought. He decided he’d better not let anyone see him; the Godaime wouldn’t be pleased if she thought he was slacking off with such a serious situation at hand. Thinking this made Kakashi realize that, although he had appropriately secured the door to the room, he’d completely forgotten about the window! He broke into a sprint, running toward his helplessly bound chuunin. What if that little bitch Genma had been loitering around the room, waiting for Kakashi to come out and had now broken in! He wouldn’t put it past that horny bastard. Shit! He thought he’d felt someone’s chakra presence in the hallway as he’d left! Nearing his destination, Kakashi was horrified to see two figures stealthily making their way around the building to the window behind which his chuunin was lying. Gathering chakra into his legs, he sprang into the air and cemented his feet to the building beneath the two men. Peeling the two jounin from the wall, he flung them unceremoniously to the ground below.
Raidou looked around in surprise; one moment he had been dragged by Genma out the window and now he was flat on his back in the dirt. Genma was glaring daggers at somebody above them; Kakashi. The Copy-nin pointed a single finger at his exposed eye then aimed it to point at both of them. There was no question as to what that meant: ‘I’ll be watching you.’(1) Kakashi slipped effortlessly through the window and slapped a load of wards on it before tightly drawing the curtains. Sighing in defeat, Genma snatched at Raidou’s hand and dragged him off in the direction of his apartment to take out his sexual frustration.
Inside
As Kakashi spun around from drawing the curtains closed he realized two things: first, Iruka was no longer in the chakra cuffs, and second, the sexy chuunin was laid out on the bed flawlessly clean and smelling of scented soap while the cloying aroma of sex emanated from the dirty sheets flung into the corner. A feeling of dread arose in the pit of his stomach as surely as a trickle of blood began to flow from his nose; he was now in dangerous territory, for even with the wards and seals keeping people both from entering as well as leaving, Iruka could be wily and tricky and could most likely escape the premises. It apparently didn’t occur to the genius jounin that Iruka now had everything he wanted in the room with him and had no intention of leaving anytime soon, at least until he had sated his sexual appetite with his lover’s body. The next thing Kakashi knew, a head slowly poked up from the other side of the bed, revealing another equally sexy equally naked, equally alluring chuunin sensei. Kakashi gasped at the appearance of Iruka’s clone, his mask now dripping crimson drops to stain the carpet. The other Iruka crawled sensuously across the bed to sit beside Iruka, sliding his hands across the taut abdominals of his maker. Kakashi whimpered as a third Iruka emerged, leaning over the shoulder of the first clone and tilting his head down with a feisty glint in his eye. The last thing he saw before he collapsed into a faint from blood loss was a very deep, very wet kiss between the clones.
When he came to, Kakashi found himself nude on the bed, both his wrists and his ankles now trapped in chakra cuffs. The two clones were gone, but the real Iruka was seated with a leg tucked under him lightly stroking Kakashi’s chest as he looked with hunger at his now captive jounin. Iruka dragged his eyes up and down the length of Kakashi’s body with a look similar to one his nin-dogs would use when gazing at a juicy piece of meat. A shiver ran through Kakashi’s body as he took in the predatory way Iruka looked at him. Oh sensei! Kakashi felt his skin begin to heat up under Iruka’s scrutiny. He felt a thrill of excitement zinging through his body as he fully realized what the look in Iruka’s eyes could only mean. Not that the bondage wasn’t making things quite clear. Iruka’s lips curved into a pout, eyes narrowing as he slunk across the bed. He seated himself Kakashi’s hips in one smooth movement.
“You left me all alone,” he said huskily.
“I’m sorry,” Kakashi replied, wondering if he was about to be punished. Ohhhh sensei!
“How about you show me how sorry you are,” Iruka leered, moving up Kakashi’s body to expose his very prominent hard-on. “With your mouth, on my cock,” he finished.
TBC
(1) Comes from the movie Meet the Parents
Next ch Preview!
"Teaser" Version 1.0
Ch 5
Ch 4
"fluffy interlude"
Ch 3
Ch 2
Ch 1