Disappointments

[k8matty]

Title: Disappointments
Pairing: Al/Scorp (is also about father-son relationship between Draco-Scorp)
Rating: N-17
Warning: Big time angst. fbowdens kilt!scorpius is back in all his skirted glory :-P Masturbation, shower!sex, porn
Disclaimer: I own nothing, but I steal it anyway
AN: How did Draco Malfoy manage to produce such a disappointment as his gay,

Comments

[asnowyowl]

Gods, girl, you took me from laughing out loud ("you could have heard a doxy fart") to feeling sad and proud for Scorpius.

Good for Astoria standing up for herself and Scorp taking the Potter name. Hurrah!! LOL

Of course, Draco didn't see how pervy he was himself when he would stand and watch Scorp's sexual escapades.

And, you wrote Ginny and James very kindly. (I don't know if I have that in me).

Loved it!~~Ann

[k8matty]

ahaha halfway through the Draco catching Scorpius with his porn, I was so tempted to stray down the incest path and just have Draco leap on him*snerk* I was like 'no! focus! angst now, incest later!'

But yes, Draco's voyeurism... it's still all a bit pervy innit lol

Writing Ginny and James nicely hurt me physically... I was going to have Al and Scorp elope together, but I wanted the big wedding confrontation. I also wanted everyone against Draco :-P

thank you *hugs*

[asnowyowl]

LOL! If it wouldn't get me arrested on the spot, I'd have an "Angst now, Incest later!" t-shirt made.

[k8matty]

Come to think of it, I have seen a tshirt that says "Draco Malfoy says harder Daddy!"

*giggle*

[valkyrie_lisa]

Humor, angst, slash, a kilt...that story had everything! *applauds loudly*

[k8matty]

Thank you! *snerks at ur icon* chase is just beaut and SUCH a House fanboy lol

[the_flic]

I recced this before I even read it because your summary made me LOL. Now I have to go back and edit my post, reccing it on the grounds of being a truly awesome fic; one of those rare stories that combines both hard angst and side splitting laughter. Dammit girl, this was fantastic!!

xxx

[k8matty]

ahaha thank you! I just read the edited post ^_^

I was surprised that this turned out okay, coz I was totally blitzed when I wrote it... I re-read it and had to repeatedly *facedesk* when I saw how my perspective kept alternating between first and third person, and how I kept switching from past to present tense... I hope I've got out all the errors, but if you see one let me know :-)

glad you enjoyed mdear ^_^

[k8matty]

Ooh yes, I also stole your Swish and Flick because it is the coolest name for a Wizarding porno mag ever, and somehow Get Off and See The Wizards just didn't ring a bell... *hums wizard of oz theme*

[mini1969]

Great fic - laughter and angst - what more could a girl want? (Apart from Scorpius in a kilt of course!)

[k8matty]

Ah yes, kilted!scorpius is most certainly on my christmas list this year...

[laurapetri]

When from LOL to AWWW

[k8matty]

eheheh cheers. it seems I can't write anything without cramming in a bit of slash, angst or incest :-P