Gift fic for yue_akuma

Jul 13, 2012 01:34

Title: New Rule
Pairing/Characters: Hina/Ohkura/Yoko
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spanking
Notes: Dear yue_akuma, a little birdy told me you might like something a little on the kinky side; I hope this suffices. :D Thanks to my cheerleaders and beta-readers. ♥
Summary: Yoko gets a new rule to follow. An AU.

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p: hina/ohkura/yoko

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yue_akuma July 12 2012, 20:13:09 UTC
HOLY CRAP ANON-SAAAAAAAAAAAAAN~!!!!!! Lemme show you my appreciation with capslock and spazzing and EVERYTHING IN THE GODDAMNED WORLD. ♥

a little birdy told me you might like something a little on the kinky side
Mwahahaha, your birdy is awesome then~! <3

First of all I giggled madly at the first 2 lines, because, really, writing down that Yoko can't run away, so epic XDDDD

AND THEN YOKO FREAKS OUT, because, well, it's YOKO, and he can't not freak out at a point or another, lololol. OMG so awesome. ♥

"We're adding a new rule," Hina says. He looks thunderous, barely contained, and Yoko's mouth waters inappropriately.
DUDE, SAME. *___*

he feels simultaneously anxious and excited about how Hina and Ohkura are going to make him remember another rule
OMG ME TOO OMGGGGGGG *______*

Yoko isn't allowed to wear clothes in the bedroom (it's another rule)
HOLY HELL I LOVE THIS RULE VERY FREAKING MUCH :Q_________________

Ohkura takes each piece from him as he takes them off and then drops them on the floor by the wall, which would make Hina mad if it were Yoko doing it, but Ohkura gets away with that kind of thing.
LOL of course, this silly brat gets away with a lot of things XDDDDD *thumbs up*

"Am I going to do push-ups or something?"
OHMYGAWD LOL'ING, SERIOUSLY XDDDD

And then ~SPANKING~ and Hina gets the ~RULE~ printed in Yoko's head with his hand and SQUEEEEEEE~ My pervert heart is just bouncing happily! :DDDDDDDD

He'd thought for a long time that he was just--messed up, wrong, like his wires had short-circuited, except then he met Hina and Ohkura. Maybe that's part of why he likes them so much: they get off on it, too.
lajhebdglkjzerhliuzgzkejlvzkhnchz YOKO SEXUAL FEELINGS AND HINAKURA MAKING IT ALL BETTER, HEARTSTRINGS TUGGED, THANK YOU <333333

"Good boy," Hina says.
*CRYING HAPPY TEARS*

"Do you even have any idea how great your ass is?"
fuuuuuuuuuu----- lahebgvlkjavbaej I LOVE YOU ANON, JUST SAYING. *_*

"The pain you feel right now is ours," Hina says, leaning in close, not whispering but Yoko can feel his breath on his neck. "And the pleasure you feel is ours, too."
FREAKING HELL OF A YES. Hina sure knows how to talk to people. *______*)b

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yue_akuma July 12 2012, 20:13:48 UTC
(thank you lj for cockblocking my love)

Hina's hand comes back wet, though if it's from tears or sweat Yoko doesn't know; he doesn't remember crying but even now he's just a mass of arousal and nerve endings firing at random. He probably missed a lot.
AWWWWWWWWWW YOKOOOOOOO~! <33333

In answer to both of them, Yoko closes his eyes and opens his mouth.
BEST. ANSWER. EVER. <3

"This is awful," Yoko complains
LOL a Yoko not complaining wouldn't be a nice Yoko ♥

The taste of Ohkura's come in his mouth flavors his words, and he thinks, New rule, new rule, new rule.
OH BOY. I can't stop making starry eyes at the screen! <3

Hina leaves the room and comes back with a damp washcloth in his hand--his right hand, the hand he must has been hitting Yoko with--and a lit cigarette dangling from his mouth.
lajbgrlzkhjglkzjhbenuc ug iohfboiuebguozkahebfk THE VISUAL oh damnit *______*

When he pulls back, the slick traces of what Yoko immediately imagines must be Ohkura's come on his own lips is hypnotizing.
MOAAAARRRRR INCREDIBLE VISUAL, ftw! 8Q________

"You know, if you wanted something to suck on, I have something right here you could use," Yoko says.
ROFLCOPTER YOKO WORSE PICK-UP LINE EVER XDDDD He's so cuuuute~<3

Hina inhales, and then breathes out smoke from his nose like an animal. "I'm saving that for later," he says.
*FLAILIIIIIIIIIIIIING*

New rule, Yoko thinks. He won't have any trouble remembering it.
I WON'T EITHER. THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

Okay now after this long and incoherent and borderline insane comment, let me say that you, anon-san, are the best kickass thing in the world after Kanjani, sorry but!

HAVE SOME RAINBOWS SPARKLING TO TELL YOU HOW HARD I LOVED THIS. THANK YOU SO MUCH, YOU INCREDIBLE HUMAN BEING. ♥ ♥ ♥

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elfiepike July 26 2012, 04:04:59 UTC
my little birdy was totallyl spurious XD i was so nervous because i haven't written much kanjani, but i'm so glad you enjoyed it!! omg that sparkly rainbow and THEM HEARTS. *~*

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yue_akuma July 26 2012, 10:35:37 UTC
LOL i had a feeling it might be her! :3

You did an incredible job! :D Thanks again! :DDD ♥

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