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entropy_maximum January 10 2011, 12:36:00 UTC
Short but sweet. I think this was a great place to end the chapter and I like how you don't give us all the little details because it follows the book so closely, instead you just give us the relevant ones, what we need for this story, for this version. I don't know if I'm making any sense but nevertheless, I eagerly await the next chapter and the happy ending you say is on the way. As much as I love angst, in fact I live for angst, it always makes me happy when there's a happy ending. Another great chapter. Well done!

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k155_me January 10 2011, 12:46:50 UTC
hahahaha i like angst a lot too, but for some reason i can't read it as well as i write it: i cringe when reading an awful lot :P but happy endings are awesome too :D
thanks for leaving a review, and for reading!

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k155_me January 22 2011, 18:39:24 UTC
Words: 4,350
Chapter 12
NEXT CHAPTER HERE

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tamikolee January 11 2011, 22:23:00 UTC
You always need the storm before the sunshine :)

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k155_me January 22 2011, 18:39:55 UTC
Thank you for reviewing :) And i agree, it always gets worse before it gets better :)
Words: 4,350
Chapter 12
NEXT CHAPTER HERE

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bexmania January 14 2011, 11:07:35 UTC
“My baby died to make this,”
I love this line, I started crying the second I read it.

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k155_me January 22 2011, 18:40:26 UTC
AW :( Yeah, i made a lot of people cry with the last chapter, apparently. But i'm glad you liked it anyway :)
Words: 4,350
Chapter 12
NEXT CHAPTER HERE

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