Circumstances Part 5

Jul 10, 2008 20:14

So here is part 5. I did absolutely no proof reading on this chapter and I apologize in advance for all the mistakes I'm sure I made. *grin* I hope you like it. *fingers crossed*

Circumstances Part 5 )

cooplee, circumstances, cooplee fanfic, coop, ashlee, fan fiction

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*happy dance* jailynn24 July 11 2008, 00:33:44 UTC
I love being at the right place at the right time. *grin* This was AWESOME, INCREDIBLE and SWOON worthy. I bounce in my chair every time I see a new chapter because I KNOW that it will blow me away. And this one did.

Ashlee's eyes dropped to his shoulders, why did he have to be so hot?

Good question Ashlee. Let's explore his hotness further. *grin* I want smut. How horrible am I to be demanding smut already?

Thank you for having Coop actually think about their lack of talking. It's such a huge issue and one that WILL not be resolved by them breaking up. *grumbles* (stupid GL writers! hire AF!!!)

Thank you for the squee I let out when I saw that you had posted and the grinning over the kisses. Thanks for the "aww's" over him washing her hair. Just thank you.

*zipping lips so I don't ask for next part*

***hugs***

~Jai

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Re: *happy dance* jyl22075 July 11 2008, 12:11:15 UTC
Jai, your comments make all the time I spend fighting with this story 100% worth it. *grinning like an idiot* I've told you before, but I'm just so happy that you like this story. I've spent many hours reading and re-reading your stories and I'm glad to give a little something back.

So, I've never written any smut before and I'm kind of nervous about it, but I think there will be some in this story.

I hate the fact that the writers never made them talk about anything. *sigh*

Thank you, thank you, thank you for all the support and the comment love. You're the best. *hugs*

Oh, and I'm hoping to have the next part finished today. *fingers crossed*

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angelzqq July 11 2008, 00:35:22 UTC
Yummy. Delicious. Hot. *sigh* This was a great chapter. You write them very true to the characters which makes it that much more enjoyable to read.Very well done JJ! *hugs*

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jyl22075 July 11 2008, 12:17:20 UTC
Thank you! You have no idea how thrilled it makes me that you think I'm writing them true to their characters. I'm hyper-critical so I pick apart everything I have them say to decide if it works or not. So, hearing that you think I'm getting it right really makes me happy.

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jyl22075 July 11 2008, 12:22:32 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. *hugs*

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anonymous July 11 2008, 01:45:44 UTC
This was great! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nancy

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jyl22075 July 11 2008, 12:23:10 UTC
Thanks, Nancy! I'll hopefully have the next chapter posted tonight. *grin*

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anonymous July 11 2008, 02:02:40 UTC
That was awesome! Keep on writing,you are good and i can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

-Mel

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jyl22075 July 11 2008, 12:24:05 UTC
Thank you, Mel! *hugs* I'm hoping to have the next chapter done today some time.

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