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Ordinary (G)

Dec 17, 2008 11:35

Title: Ordinary
Author: justthismorning
Rating: G
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Summary: Morgana doesn't need to magic to see.
A/N: sort of a continuation of Precious. You don't have to read that one to understand this one.

( It has nothing to do with magic )

length: one-shot, series: another's eyes, pairing: arthur/merlin, genre: general, rating: g, fandom: merlin

Comments 8

lietothedevil January 3 2009, 06:19:04 UTC

i like the way this story flows. it's nice. the pov is one of the few good ones i've read.

justthisfic January 3 2009, 17:39:49 UTC

thank you. I'm glad you liked it :)

graspthethorn January 6 2009, 19:50:40 UTC

This was gorgeous. Absolutely lovely. :D
Oh, oh, oh your POV is wonderful and that last line is perfect.

-x-

justthisfic January 8 2009, 14:27:30 UTC

thanks!
I love Morgana.
:)

archaeologist_d February 16 2009, 18:16:06 UTC

This was lovely. I really liked the way you described how they communicated. Well done.

justthisfic February 20 2009, 02:10:35 UTC

oh, thank you! :)

cordeliasmarz February 2 2010, 17:00:59 UTC

*sigh* this one's lovely too ^_^
I love Morgana
And I love your descriptions of how they don't need words, just their facial expressions, little quirks
So adorable
So perfect ^_^

melawen_c June 8 2010, 22:47:32 UTC

I'm perusing the archives, came across this, and had to stop and tell you how much I like it. ♥ Amazing, how well you captured their relationship in such a short piece.

They botch real communication beyond recognition, but they don’t need it anyway.
Aww, that sums them up perfectly. *loves*